Just Daisy, Part 1
Inspired by 'through a child's eyes' prompt34 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I am not a fan of blind contests either--just like I would be reluctant to buy a book without the author's name on it! I like your speaking in your son's voice and his "daisy" expression--it was like my saying "lemonaise" for mayonnaise when I was his age. Kids can wrap us around their fingers and say the "darndest things". Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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I am not a fan of blind contests either--just like I would be reluctant to buy a book without the author's name on it! I like your speaking in your son's voice and his "daisy" expression--it was like my saying "lemonaise" for mayonnaise when I was his age. Kids can wrap us around their fingers and say the "darndest things". Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 22-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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Joan, are not they just hysterical.. again a big thank you. hope you are doing well... jimi
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Still making progress with one more physical therapy session left. The therapist is confident I can start the Fall session of my joint exercise this week--just no periformis stretches. Be well- Joan
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please do take care..
Comment from Douglas Paul
I enjoyed this one. I liked the fact that you told it from the point of view of the child and I enjoyed the child's logic LOL. Fun read, Jimi
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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I enjoyed this one. I liked the fact that you told it from the point of view of the child and I enjoyed the child's logic LOL. Fun read, Jimi
Comment Written 22-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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Douglas Paul, a huge thank you.. jimi
Comment from patcelaw
When they get to the age of this child, they have all kinds of tricks they try to pull to keep from doing what they must do. I enjoyed the read and had to laugh at some of the story as I remember my girls pulling some of these tricks at times. Patricia
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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When they get to the age of this child, they have all kinds of tricks they try to pull to keep from doing what they must do. I enjoyed the read and had to laugh at some of the story as I remember my girls pulling some of these tricks at times. Patricia
Comment Written 22-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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pat,
Though my thank you is quite late, it is no less appreciated. I am honored you stopped by to read and review. yes, they are funny. Thank you so very much.. jimi
Comment from Newsome
Such a sweet story...one that the reader just loves to crawl into...Enjoyed reading it very much,Jimi...Have to ask...How did he come up with "Just daisy"?
Nice
Newsome
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Such a sweet story...one that the reader just loves to crawl into...Enjoyed reading it very much,Jimi...Have to ask...How did he come up with "Just daisy"?
Nice
Newsome
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Sweet friend, you are really just too sweet. I thakn you so much for your friendship and loyal support. This paid you not one thing to review. I am honored..
lol.. I actually have no idea how he came up with that.. I have so many stories to tell of my children that are hysterical..but then, don't we all//? again thank you sweet Newsome..
Comment from GWHARGIS
Very cute story. I liked the probably just gas comment and his retort of not in the car. The child like view point was done well and I knew it was based on a real child. Most times you can tell when someone is playing at child writing. Yours rang true. Nice job.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Very cute story. I liked the probably just gas comment and his retort of not in the car. The child like view point was done well and I knew it was based on a real child. Most times you can tell when someone is playing at child writing. Yours rang true. Nice job.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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GWHARGIS, thank you ever so much for revieiwing this fun work. I am humbled... jlsavell
Comment from Eleanor Buron
An adorable story and I can see the little boy acting out an Academy Award performance just to have to go to playschool anyway. But Mom may be in for more surprises if he makes her "day just daisy." ;) I smiled through the entire story. I love the child's viewpoint and how he understands things like gas. LOL I enjoyed this story very much!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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An adorable story and I can see the little boy acting out an Academy Award performance just to have to go to playschool anyway. But Mom may be in for more surprises if he makes her "day just daisy." ;) I smiled through the entire story. I love the child's viewpoint and how he understands things like gas. LOL I enjoyed this story very much!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Ellie, once again thank you ever so much. I always look forward to your reviews. thank you so much sweet friend.. jimi
Comment from Joe Hudson
Well done! I was enjoying the read. I loved the many little moments with their joy and love. Children are the ultimate in honesty and what they show us of their feelings and how they perceive life.
I enjoyed this very much.
Great work!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Well done! I was enjoying the read. I loved the many little moments with their joy and love. Children are the ultimate in honesty and what they show us of their feelings and how they perceive life.
I enjoyed this very much.
Great work!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Joe, another exceptional, wow, thank you so very very much..... jimi
Comment from fictionwriter
So cute and very child-like. I could just see a little boy saying those exact things. I bet he did make his mother regret taking him to daycare. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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So cute and very child-like. I could just see a little boy saying those exact things. I bet he did make his mother regret taking him to daycare. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Joy, thank you very much for stopping by. Yes, little boys are quite precocious.. lol.... jimi
Comment from Maureen's Pen
This is lovely dear jimi. I was smiling and enjoying the read.
Skillfully done and full of so many little moments their joy and love. Children share so much if we really open our eyes and our heart.
I loved this very much.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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This is lovely dear jimi. I was smiling and enjoying the read.
Skillfully done and full of so many little moments their joy and love. Children share so much if we really open our eyes and our heart.
I loved this very much.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 03-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Maureen, once again sweet friend, thank you.... jimi
Comment from Hitcher
They are quite precious are they not friend, there little minds toiling away, conjuring up all kinds of concrete solutions to there would be plays, then struggling with the unforeseen outcome when things don't go their way, CLASSIC! He should of tried it on daddy, he would of given in for sure, ha ha.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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They are quite precious are they not friend, there little minds toiling away, conjuring up all kinds of concrete solutions to there would be plays, then struggling with the unforeseen outcome when things don't go their way, CLASSIC! He should of tried it on daddy, he would of given in for sure, ha ha.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Hitcher, once again sweet friend, thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!! jimi
