Multi-colored Memories
Rhyming Poem22 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is really special. The way you changed the color of each line and discussed mulitcolored memories. I really enjoyed reading this poem.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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This is really special. The way you changed the color of each line and discussed mulitcolored memories. I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much!!! Debbie
Comment from poetstar
I love your poem, and that the lessons and experiences in your life have made you a true authentic person. Not everyone can say that. PERIODS OF TROUBLE AND DESPAIR, BROUGHT ME THE ABILITY TO CARE. We may not enjoy the trouble and despair, but it sure lets us know how others suffer, so that we may make their lives better. I love the title and multi colors to match it. Your words were like rainbows of beauty too. I truly enjoyed your poem. Very Sincerely Vonnie
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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I love your poem, and that the lessons and experiences in your life have made you a true authentic person. Not everyone can say that. PERIODS OF TROUBLE AND DESPAIR, BROUGHT ME THE ABILITY TO CARE. We may not enjoy the trouble and despair, but it sure lets us know how others suffer, so that we may make their lives better. I love the title and multi colors to match it. Your words were like rainbows of beauty too. I truly enjoyed your poem. Very Sincerely Vonnie
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much. I am glad you enjoyed it!!! Debbie
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A wonderful poem. Vonnie
Comment from Chrisfiore
Greetings dejohnsrld,
This is a delightful poem, full of optimism and also reflecting personal self-worth. I enjoyed reading it very much. I thought it was well crafted and the rhyme and meter was perfect. My best to you. ;) Chrisfiore
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Greetings dejohnsrld,
This is a delightful poem, full of optimism and also reflecting personal self-worth. I enjoyed reading it very much. I thought it was well crafted and the rhyme and meter was perfect. My best to you. ;) Chrisfiore
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much!!! Debbie
Comment from EMB
This is one of those poems readers should never get enough of. It speaks of trying moments in life, but it also speaks of how to accept life, yourself, and being grateful in the process.
Nice work.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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This is one of those poems readers should never get enough of. It speaks of trying moments in life, but it also speaks of how to accept life, yourself, and being grateful in the process.
Nice work.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much!!! Debbie
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely positive poem with good rhythm and rhyme telling of the ups and downs of life. It is true we do learn a lot from the bad or sad times, seeking positive attitude is sometimes a challenge but as you so beautifully say they all make up Multi-coloured memories of a lifetime. I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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A lovely positive poem with good rhythm and rhyme telling of the ups and downs of life. It is true we do learn a lot from the bad or sad times, seeking positive attitude is sometimes a challenge but as you so beautifully say they all make up Multi-coloured memories of a lifetime. I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much!!! Debbie
Comment from Shirlena
I enjoyed the different color of each line reflecting the colors in the image as well as the title so that memories are truly multiple. I also like the progression of the poem from possible not a favorable beginning to a triumphant ending.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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I enjoyed the different color of each line reflecting the colors in the image as well as the title so that memories are truly multiple. I also like the progression of the poem from possible not a favorable beginning to a triumphant ending.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much!!! Debbie
Comment from Dodey
Wonderful work and what a truly beautiful layout, with the different colored lines that fits well the title and then the lovely artwork to further enhance it..
Wonderful rhyming couplets and word choice that bring clear images of your memories. The good and the not so good..But the final couplet is proof of your rising above it all, as you say...
Multi-colored memories
Have created authentic me
I can relate to this wonderful work..I felt all your emotions in the reading, from the sorrow, the disappointment and then finally the realization that
you have found the real you at last.
Bravo my friend..So deserving of the 6 stars..Emotional and heartfelt..We women are amazing are we not! :) Smiles and Kind regards...Dee
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Wonderful work and what a truly beautiful layout, with the different colored lines that fits well the title and then the lovely artwork to further enhance it..
Wonderful rhyming couplets and word choice that bring clear images of your memories. The good and the not so good..But the final couplet is proof of your rising above it all, as you say...
Multi-colored memories
Have created authentic me
I can relate to this wonderful work..I felt all your emotions in the reading, from the sorrow, the disappointment and then finally the realization that
you have found the real you at last.
Bravo my friend..So deserving of the 6 stars..Emotional and heartfelt..We women are amazing are we not! :) Smiles and Kind regards...Dee
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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We certainly are!!! Thank you so much for the kind and thoughtful review and the stars. I apologize for not replying to your PM, but I clicked delete instead of send and couldn't get it back. Thank you again!!! Debbie
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My pleasure Debbie, and my joy to read such wonderful work..Kind regards to you my friend..Dee
Comment from suep
I enjoyed this very much! I love the title, very creative, as well as how you weave the colors into your poem. Good rhyming. Especially like 'Periods of trouble and despair
Brought to me ability to care'. Tells how you became a better person through your difficulties and found the real you. Very nice!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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I enjoyed this very much! I love the title, very creative, as well as how you weave the colors into your poem. Good rhyming. Especially like 'Periods of trouble and despair
Brought to me ability to care'. Tells how you became a better person through your difficulties and found the real you. Very nice!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much!!! Debbie
Comment from Stepperdark
THIS IS AN AWESOME WORK. WELL WRITTEN, CREATIVE, ORIGINAL, AND MEANINGFUL. THE THEME IS HONEST AND GRACEFUL. THE RHYMES; SMOOTHE AND AUTHENTIC, AND THE LAY-OUT AND PHOTO ARE COLORFUL AND CREATIVE... GOOD JOB.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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THIS IS AN AWESOME WORK. WELL WRITTEN, CREATIVE, ORIGINAL, AND MEANINGFUL. THE THEME IS HONEST AND GRACEFUL. THE RHYMES; SMOOTHE AND AUTHENTIC, AND THE LAY-OUT AND PHOTO ARE COLORFUL AND CREATIVE... GOOD JOB.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much!!! Debbie
Comment from cephira
You really worked hard on this one! The idea of using the various colors on each line was delightful! Your poem flowed well and I liked the way you came full circle in the piece to emphasize "the authentic" self. This is something that takes time, introspection, and acceptance (like you said!) Well done and enjoyed reading it.
Cephira
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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You really worked hard on this one! The idea of using the various colors on each line was delightful! Your poem flowed well and I liked the way you came full circle in the piece to emphasize "the authentic" self. This is something that takes time, introspection, and acceptance (like you said!) Well done and enjoyed reading it.
Cephira
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much!!! Debbie
