Moments in Time
Child Four poem15 total reviews
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Debbie, well penned, I couldn't of said it better. This sums up my whole attitude in your words. Nothing beats wisdom through experience and then being able to visualize your path in life. Truly magic and inspirational. Kindest wishes James xx
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2013
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Hi Debbie, well penned, I couldn't of said it better. This sums up my whole attitude in your words. Nothing beats wisdom through experience and then being able to visualize your path in life. Truly magic and inspirational. Kindest wishes James xx
Comment Written 02-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2013
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We see life much alike, don't we? Thank you so very much for the kind words and stars. Take care, my friend~Debbie xx
Comment from Wes Guptill
Dear friend,
It is with a glad heart and a thankful mind that I read your work this evening. I have been away for a while now, but I did not forget the work of those artists who have given me such reading pleasure as what you have rendered here. It is what I have come to expect of your talent: thoughtful, sincere, and simplistically poignant. With every piece of your work that I read, I feel that I know you just that much more. But I will never know you so much as to not be moved by each emerging work. Powerful work here, my friend.
Salud,
Wes
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2013
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Dear friend,
It is with a glad heart and a thankful mind that I read your work this evening. I have been away for a while now, but I did not forget the work of those artists who have given me such reading pleasure as what you have rendered here. It is what I have come to expect of your talent: thoughtful, sincere, and simplistically poignant. With every piece of your work that I read, I feel that I know you just that much more. But I will never know you so much as to not be moved by each emerging work. Powerful work here, my friend.
Salud,
Wes
Comment Written 02-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2013
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Wes, I am so glad to here from you. Your warm and kind words always make my day better. I am glad you enjoyed this one which is written from the heart. Thank you so very much. Hope to hear from you again soon. Have a blessed 2013!!! Debbie
Comment from ashimpandit
Dear friends,
"Moments in Time " is a very good Self Improvement Poetry in the world.I just read it and find a
unique concept.You chose a unique stile and make it successfully.You used some powerful words and give us a
sweetness poetry.Happy new year 2013...
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2013
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Dear friends,
"Moments in Time " is a very good Self Improvement Poetry in the world.I just read it and find a
unique concept.You chose a unique stile and make it successfully.You used some powerful words and give us a
sweetness poetry.Happy new year 2013...
Comment Written 02-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2013
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Thank you so very much~Debbie
Comment from megg_2020
I loved your poem. I thought it was wonderfully written and really spoke to a reader about certain times in life. Again, beautifully written. Blessed Be.
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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2013
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I loved your poem. I thought it was wonderfully written and really spoke to a reader about certain times in life. Again, beautifully written. Blessed Be.
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Comment Written 02-Jan-2013
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Thank you so very much~Debbie
Comment from Gungalo
Debbie it's Child Four and it's a poem style by Ann Mare Mas. It's done very well so let's give the credit where it's due. I love this:
Joy
is partaking in the wonderment
available in the
moment
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Debbie it's Child Four and it's a poem style by Ann Mare Mas. It's done very well so let's give the credit where it's due. I love this:
Joy
is partaking in the wonderment
available in the
moment
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Comment Written 02-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2013
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I changed that last night. Glad you enjoyed this. Thank you~Debbie