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Comment from GWHARGIS
It seems everyone has that one special dog. No matter how many other dogs you get through out your life, you never quite feel the same intense love for them. I had Claire, a beagle. I used to joke that she was my spinster sister. She hung out with me, helped me watch the children. It was like a kinship that we had. I still feel her loss. Thanks for posting and making me think of her again.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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It seems everyone has that one special dog. No matter how many other dogs you get through out your life, you never quite feel the same intense love for them. I had Claire, a beagle. I used to joke that she was my spinster sister. She hung out with me, helped me watch the children. It was like a kinship that we had. I still feel her loss. Thanks for posting and making me think of her again.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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Thank you GWHargis. It is amazing how attached you get. It brings a tear.
Comment from sunnilicious
Everyone needs a good companion. That photograph shows a kind and gentle dog. Sorry to read about her passing. You must miss her dearly. Hope you get another great pet. Good work.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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Everyone needs a good companion. That photograph shows a kind and gentle dog. Sorry to read about her passing. You must miss her dearly. Hope you get another great pet. Good work.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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Thank you sunnilicious. I do miss her, but that's my last pet.
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I'll remember that when you write about your new goldfish. Goodnight :)
Comment from yonashalom
I enjoyed reading this poem just to hear about this loyal friend. I liked the line with the sloppy kiss. I could feel the wet tongue of the dog with that one. They are indiscriminate kissers. LOL :) `Yona
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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I enjoyed reading this poem just to hear about this loyal friend. I liked the line with the sloppy kiss. I could feel the wet tongue of the dog with that one. They are indiscriminate kissers. LOL :) `Yona
Comment Written 17-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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Thanks Yona. That kiss can make you smile.
Comment from judelesemann
Very nice poem. I like this Lisalet style/format. Your poem flows well is is such a loving tribute to your beast friend.Well done. Be blessed, Jude
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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Very nice poem. I like this Lisalet style/format. Your poem flows well is is such a loving tribute to your beast friend.Well done. Be blessed, Jude
Comment Written 17-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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Thank you Jude. It is a complex yet beautiful style.
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Wow...I had more typos in my review...sorry! You are welcome. Be blessed, Jude
Comment from hifein
liked this a lot treischel. the style is interesting and effective and you got your message across well using it. even though it's been many years since i put sam to sleep, i still remember her sad eyes looking in mine when i told the vet, okay.
one of the hardest things i've ever done. i've found cats pretty good friends as well over the years. that's one good looking hound.
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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liked this a lot treischel. the style is interesting and effective and you got your message across well using it. even though it's been many years since i put sam to sleep, i still remember her sad eyes looking in mine when i told the vet, okay.
one of the hardest things i've ever done. i've found cats pretty good friends as well over the years. that's one good looking hound.
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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Thank you hifien. You brought tears to my eyes as I remember that day so well. I cried for hours afterward, and I hardly ever cry. The only consolation was that she went peacefully and her suffering was over.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Your dog was lovely, she was a good age too, I can understand your loss they are a part of the family and losing them is as hard. I loved this tribute to her, it is a really lovely read. xsx Sandra
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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Your dog was lovely, she was a good age too, I can understand your loss they are a part of the family and losing them is as hard. I loved this tribute to her, it is a really lovely read. xsx Sandra
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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Thank you Sandra. I do miss her.
