Leslie Ann's Exploits
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Leslie Ann makes a move"A spoiled young lady who learns the hard way
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Comment from steevie
I think Jonathan just might go for it!! That vixen, Leslie, gets is harder and harder to turn down as the story goes. Photo evidence may be of some help down the road.
Too bad though if Jonathan does take Leslie up on her offer, there is a wife and two kids involved so its complex.
well done, Dossie
smiles
steve
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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I think Jonathan just might go for it!! That vixen, Leslie, gets is harder and harder to turn down as the story goes. Photo evidence may be of some help down the road.
Too bad though if Jonathan does take Leslie up on her offer, there is a wife and two kids involved so its complex.
well done, Dossie
smiles
steve
Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Steevie, your reviews make my heart sing. Thanks you sooooo much for your support and encouragement- both are greatly appreciated! Hugs, Dossie
Comment from Curly Girly
It all read well, and the plot thickens. One typo:
I think you left off a period at the end of the last verse.
Looking forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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It all read well, and the plot thickens. One typo:
I think you left off a period at the end of the last verse.
Looking forward to reading more.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much, Curly Girl for your comments and careful reading, I really appreciate both!
Comment from Steliano
Every punter in the world will take a tip especially if presented in the way you have described,. the comparing of notes always reveals the intelligence of the tipster.
Leslie Ann, Mary Ann, Johnathan, and Thomas, could be on a winner Regards
Steliano
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Every punter in the world will take a tip especially if presented in the way you have described,. the comparing of notes always reveals the intelligence of the tipster.
Leslie Ann, Mary Ann, Johnathan, and Thomas, could be on a winner Regards
Steliano
Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Steliano for reading, commenting and rating this article. Your comments are eagerly received! Dossie
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Hmmm...what is their plan? Why did he take photos of an innocent meeting in public at the library? There is nothing wrong with that in anyone's eyes. This can't be used against them. He'd need a photo of them kissing, or something more than talking and comparing notes in the library.
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Hmmm...what is their plan? Why did he take photos of an innocent meeting in public at the library? There is nothing wrong with that in anyone's eyes. This can't be used against them. He'd need a photo of them kissing, or something more than talking and comparing notes in the library.
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Did this chapter fall flat? There is more action in the next one that I just finished. Perhaps if I find a picture of the two of them, it will be more convincing. This is the first of a two-part plan Leslie Ann is executing, but if this chapter doesn't say much, I will find a way to spice it up a bit. Thanks for your comments, I appreciate them!