Leslie Ann's Exploits
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Leslie Ann goes to room 10"A spoiled young lady who learns the hard way
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Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
God Lord girl...this could make one's hair stand on end..one thing sure my momma wouldn't have survived. One way or another she would have made a hole in the door and got out. This was an eerie chapter for sure. Good job. Janie did a spot for youtube where she reads an excerpt from my book. Play Part 2 if you go out under my name and find it. Part 1 was the blooper, why the guy put it up we don't know. She told him not to but? God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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God Lord girl...this could make one's hair stand on end..one thing sure my momma wouldn't have survived. One way or another she would have made a hole in the door and got out. This was an eerie chapter for sure. Good job. Janie did a spot for youtube where she reads an excerpt from my book. Play Part 2 if you go out under my name and find it. Part 1 was the blooper, why the guy put it up we don't know. She told him not to but? God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much for your complimentary and encouraging review! It is quite scary isn't it? I will go on amazon.com and purchase one of your books. Take care and God bless!
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Oh darling I'm going to send you a book free. Janie is pretty sure by Friday she will have the money to send you too. We need your address one more time, pretty please. I'm sure Janie has it but I want it to send the book. God loves you and I do too.
Comment from angelmagnet
Your author notes make me wonder, but as I answer you, I recognize that it must be MaryAnn who sent this note to Leslie Ann. She's a little off, too. A delightful story with a bunch of kooks. Sounds a little like my life. Smiles, Cindy
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Your author notes make me wonder, but as I answer you, I recognize that it must be MaryAnn who sent this note to Leslie Ann. She's a little off, too. A delightful story with a bunch of kooks. Sounds a little like my life. Smiles, Cindy
Comment Written 25-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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It is like life, isn't it. There have been a few employees in my career that I would have liked to place in a similar situation- LOL. Thanks so much for your support and encouragement! Dossie
Comment from nancy_e_davis
What was it a roomful of cadavers? This girl is insane I do believe and very unstable. It could have been a bit longer and told more but I know that is hard. :-) Nancy
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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What was it a roomful of cadavers? This girl is insane I do believe and very unstable. It could have been a bit longer and told more but I know that is hard. :-) Nancy
Comment Written 25-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much for your complimentary and encouraging review!
Comment from Gungalo
Oh I think that she is being played by Thomas. Hehehe. He is using the same tactics on her. It will be interesting to see how this plays out.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Oh I think that she is being played by Thomas. Hehehe. He is using the same tactics on her. It will be interesting to see how this plays out.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much, I appreciate your time and comments!
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Smiles.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wait! The notes weren't from Thom... but from Mary Ann! Love it.
>>She discovered the door was locked from the inside,
Don't you mean OUTSIDE?
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Wait! The notes weren't from Thom... but from Mary Ann! Love it.
>>She discovered the door was locked from the inside,
Don't you mean OUTSIDE?
Comment Written 25-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thanks! You're right, it should have been outside.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Dossie,
The story continues to become more interesting and suspenseful. Leslie Ann will kill to have her way. The poem is well-written, and I am anxious for the next release. Has she, in fact, killed 20 people, or is she dreaming?
Curtis
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Dossie,
The story continues to become more interesting and suspenseful. Leslie Ann will kill to have her way. The poem is well-written, and I am anxious for the next release. Has she, in fact, killed 20 people, or is she dreaming?
Curtis
Comment Written 25-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much for your complimentary and encouraging review!
Comment from God's Writer
A very interesting story my friend. I found your story to be very delightful. Your word pictures are excellent. Thank you very much.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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A very interesting story my friend. I found your story to be very delightful. Your word pictures are excellent. Thank you very much.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much for your complimentary and encouraging review!
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh my friend you have done so well ion this chapter very good rhyming through this poem you build the scenes so well I enjoyed well done if it were up to me it would be 6 all the way for you regards Jill
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Oh my friend you have done so well ion this chapter very good rhyming through this poem you build the scenes so well I enjoyed well done if it were up to me it would be 6 all the way for you regards Jill
Comment Written 25-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much for your complimentary and encouraging review!
Comment from emjaihammond
This story was full of lots of excitement and the scene at the end, really gives me the "heeby-geeby's" just thinking about it! I enjoyed reading it. Your writing holds a lot of mystery and intrigue. It captures the reader and takes them along on a most entertaining journey.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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This story was full of lots of excitement and the scene at the end, really gives me the "heeby-geeby's" just thinking about it! I enjoyed reading it. Your writing holds a lot of mystery and intrigue. It captures the reader and takes them along on a most entertaining journey.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much for your complimentary and encouraging review! I'm delighted you liked it! Dossie
Comment from c_lucas
You'll probably take a hit or two to the phrase "a holy ghost." The Bible refers to only "The Holy Ghost." This is very well written with an increase in the defense factor. Good Job.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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You'll probably take a hit or two to the phrase "a holy ghost." The Bible refers to only "The Holy Ghost." This is very well written with an increase in the defense factor. Good Job.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Thanks, Charlie, for your thoughtful insight. I guess I got carried away there for a while. I made a change that I think will work just as well. Be blessed!
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Much better. Charlie