Lipstick on a Pig
Yard work20 total reviews
Comment from The Death
Well,we have our own ways to create and visualise our yards.
They are sort of your own creative space where you can have your imagination bloom.it is like a live poetry.
But each yard is beautiful and complete in itself.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Well,we have our own ways to create and visualise our yards.
They are sort of your own creative space where you can have your imagination bloom.it is like a live poetry.
But each yard is beautiful and complete in itself.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thank you fo the great review and the kind words. Gretchen
Comment from MelReyn
;) My first reaction is that this can be summed up nicely with 'Yup. This yard here isn't much to look at, but its MY yard.'
I like how you are opening up and telling us more about your thoughts and feelings. Your real ones. I know how easy it is to hide behind characters and stories. Being real isn't easy. 'Baby Megs' taught me that. First I felt like I was putting my diary up for everyone to read. Then I wondered who would want to read this? Would they feel like it was a waste of time? So easy to doubt yourself and your writing when you put yourself out there like this.
So my hat is off to you. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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;) My first reaction is that this can be summed up nicely with 'Yup. This yard here isn't much to look at, but its MY yard.'
I like how you are opening up and telling us more about your thoughts and feelings. Your real ones. I know how easy it is to hide behind characters and stories. Being real isn't easy. 'Baby Megs' taught me that. First I felt like I was putting my diary up for everyone to read. Then I wondered who would want to read this? Would they feel like it was a waste of time? So easy to doubt yourself and your writing when you put yourself out there like this.
So my hat is off to you. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thanks again for the insightful advice. I was very nervous about my little rants. But I figured nothing ventured, nothing gained. You need to put more about the hassles and rewards of being a Dr.'s wife. I'm sure it ain't all glamour. Thank you for the wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from Max Edon
I enjoyed reading this. Yards bring a lot of frustration and joy to homeowners. My own yard s very tiny, so I don't have a lot of work to do in it.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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I enjoyed reading this. Yards bring a lot of frustration and joy to homeowners. My own yard s very tiny, so I don't have a lot of work to do in it.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Mine is only fashionable during the fall around Halloween. LOL. Thanks for the great review. Gretchen
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You are welcome
Comment from Joy Graham
We all have different yards to work with. I picture yours as a beach type of yard. I love the idea of having a porch swing. You could have a nice display of yard ornaments. I enjoyed reading this topic and hope you can find your own unique yard style.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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We all have different yards to work with. I picture yours as a beach type of yard. I love the idea of having a porch swing. You could have a nice display of yard ornaments. I enjoyed reading this topic and hope you can find your own unique yard style.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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I call my unique style getting ready for Halloween. That's the only time my yard gets people to stop and stare. We really decorate for the neighborhood. Thanks for the great review. Gretchen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Just wondering when It became so all important to have a beautiful yard. I wonder if we are insulting our heavenly Father redoing his landscape to suit our idea of beauty. I saw a wild flower once that looked just like a butterfly. It may have been a licorice plant, I really don't remember but, Hey, It outshines any hybrid I have ever seen. LOL Kids are the best decoration anyhow. Right? LOL Nancy
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Just wondering when It became so all important to have a beautiful yard. I wonder if we are insulting our heavenly Father redoing his landscape to suit our idea of beauty. I saw a wild flower once that looked just like a butterfly. It may have been a licorice plant, I really don't remember but, Hey, It outshines any hybrid I have ever seen. LOL Kids are the best decoration anyhow. Right? LOL Nancy
Comment Written 29-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the great and understanding review. Gretchen
Comment from mumsyone
I can relate to your every word, as I live on a hill that was formed years ago by blow sand (sand that shifts easily from one place to another if not covered, at least by
weeds--no such thing as good grass here). I struggle to grow the simplest of flowers, yet cantaloupe and watermelon thrive. But the hill is my own, and I have no neighbors within half a mile. So, like you, I can sit on my deck and be thankful that my son was raised here.
A well-written, enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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I can relate to your every word, as I live on a hill that was formed years ago by blow sand (sand that shifts easily from one place to another if not covered, at least by
weeds--no such thing as good grass here). I struggle to grow the simplest of flowers, yet cantaloupe and watermelon thrive. But the hill is my own, and I have no neighbors within half a mile. So, like you, I can sit on my deck and be thankful that my son was raised here.
A well-written, enjoyable read.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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No good grass here either. Thank you for te peek into another sandy yard. East coast or West coast? Thank you for the great review. Gretchen
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Midwest! (Illinois)
Comment from Zue65
Yes, a beautiful non-fiction article, made more interesting with the use of the metaphor lipstick on a pig. The yard may not be comparable to well manicured gardens with exquisite blooms. but a yard no matter how sparse, devoid of beauty, is still the most beautiful garden, because it keeps beautiful memories, the sole witness to growing up kids playing in that garden, and the love that goes with it. I love it, well done.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Yes, a beautiful non-fiction article, made more interesting with the use of the metaphor lipstick on a pig. The yard may not be comparable to well manicured gardens with exquisite blooms. but a yard no matter how sparse, devoid of beauty, is still the most beautiful garden, because it keeps beautiful memories, the sole witness to growing up kids playing in that garden, and the love that goes with it. I love it, well done.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the great review. I really appreciate it. Gretchen
Comment from N.K. Wagner
The barrier islands have a special charm. Live oak, pine, lantana, sea oats. More than that will be stunted or killed by the salt air anyway. Every place has it's own special beauty. Why destroy it by trying to make it something it's not? Better you enjoy your wine and your tidied up parcel of heaven the way God intended it. Well organized and clearly written. Good job. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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The barrier islands have a special charm. Live oak, pine, lantana, sea oats. More than that will be stunted or killed by the salt air anyway. Every place has it's own special beauty. Why destroy it by trying to make it something it's not? Better you enjoy your wine and your tidied up parcel of heaven the way God intended it. Well organized and clearly written. Good job. :) Nancy
Comment Written 29-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the great and thoughtful review. Gretchen
Comment from DR DIP
this is the first time i have ever critiqued a short story..but i could really relate to your little bit of prose..it made me laugh..especially the title and its analogy thereof..congratulations
dip
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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this is the first time i have ever critiqued a short story..but i could really relate to your little bit of prose..it made me laugh..especially the title and its analogy thereof..congratulations
dip
Comment Written 29-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the great and fun review. Gretchen
Comment from adewpearl
excellent descriptive detail - I can imagine your humble little sandy yard and the view you have from your porch, and I can feel the love you have for your home, even if the good folks from Better Homes and Gardens are not standing at alert :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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excellent descriptive detail - I can imagine your humble little sandy yard and the view you have from your porch, and I can feel the love you have for your home, even if the good folks from Better Homes and Gardens are not standing at alert :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the wonderful review. Gretchen
