Visible Flight of Invisible Might!
An invisible might drives one to a visible flight.78 total reviews
Comment from Taffspride
A truly inspirational and thought provoking poem. From it I read a simple message, you deliver in these powerful words.
"Open your heart and allow Him in"
Thank you for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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A truly inspirational and thought provoking poem. From it I read a simple message, you deliver in these powerful words.
"Open your heart and allow Him in"
Thank you for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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Hi
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments!
Comment from Sanku
that was a poem i liked very much for it is exactly what i believe in .there is a spark that has come from the 'eternal soul' within us .look within deeply and you will see it .but the thick fog of ego covers it often hence we are not aware of it .thank you for writing .
do you live in India?
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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that was a poem i liked very much for it is exactly what i believe in .there is a spark that has come from the 'eternal soul' within us .look within deeply and you will see it .but the thick fog of ego covers it often hence we are not aware of it .thank you for writing .
do you live in India?
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi Sanku,
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful, morale boosting comments having your praiseworthy thoughts and the Six Stars!
Nowadays, I am in India.
God bless you.
Comment from JM daSilva
If you want success, you have to learn to cry. You make it clear there. A child keeps falling all the time, but they get up and continue to learn to walk, and they all learn that. Keep trying. Good message.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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If you want success, you have to learn to cry. You make it clear there. A child keeps falling all the time, but they get up and continue to learn to walk, and they all learn that. Keep trying. Good message.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi JM daSilva,
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
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Thanks for the message.
Comment from GregoryCody
Such a powerful message. I love your reference to unalloyed gold, makes one think. Very good descriptions and a strong flow favorite is
Have faith in God to be wise, brave and bold,
The craved success is yours as unalloyed gold!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Such a powerful message. I love your reference to unalloyed gold, makes one think. Very good descriptions and a strong flow favorite is
Have faith in God to be wise, brave and bold,
The craved success is yours as unalloyed gold!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi G. Cody,
Thank you very much for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from GWinterwin
Good poem here depicting the greatness of almighty God. With faith unwavering we can walk with confidence of victory. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Good poem here depicting the greatness of almighty God. With faith unwavering we can walk with confidence of victory. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from Ridley Williams
You are spot on in your theme in this piece of work. You're only done if you quit, and it helps to have a strong faith to guide you. Strongly portrayed, Ridley
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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You are spot on in your theme in this piece of work. You're only done if you quit, and it helps to have a strong faith to guide you. Strongly portrayed, Ridley
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from Dibul
A great poem, complete with a lot of meaning and faith in God. You've talked about very important and simple little things that keep us going. "Look within and find Him everywhere" is a great line! I like the use of rhymes in this poem, especially the multiple rhymes in a single line. Thanks for sharing and good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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A great poem, complete with a lot of meaning and faith in God. You've talked about very important and simple little things that keep us going. "Look within and find Him everywhere" is a great line! I like the use of rhymes in this poem, especially the multiple rhymes in a single line. Thanks for sharing and good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi
Thank you very much for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from 9999pool
The author's note summarized the review of this poem very well. yes, God is ever present and if we allow Him to come into our lives and let him stay there forever, whatever our labors, aspirations and needs will be fulfilled toan extent that was meant to be.
Good write and well expressed.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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The author's note summarized the review of this poem very well. yes, God is ever present and if we allow Him to come into our lives and let him stay there forever, whatever our labors, aspirations and needs will be fulfilled toan extent that was meant to be.
Good write and well expressed.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi
Thank you very much for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from amada
Your great poem here speaks so well of many wonderful things. The passage that touched me the most is about the one on not giving up, I am one of the one who lose heart, easily. This is a great inspiration for me. Thank you.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Your great poem here speaks so well of many wonderful things. The passage that touched me the most is about the one on not giving up, I am one of the one who lose heart, easily. This is a great inspiration for me. Thank you.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi
Thank you very much for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from McMurry903
This is a great poem on faith. You convey your spirtiual message well with many words of wisdom. I enjoyed very much and wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Brian
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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This is a great poem on faith. You convey your spirtiual message well with many words of wisdom. I enjoyed very much and wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Brian
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi
Thank you very much for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.