Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

solid rhyming couplets
good alliteration in today/tomorrow/tis the time
and in forever fill
vivid descriptive detail of setting that creates a serene mood effectively :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

Waterfalls do have a magical way of refreshing, renewing and calming the spirit. You describe it well. Makes me want to go find a waterfall right now and enjoy the sensation. You have captured the essence of the waterfall well. Good choice of artwork to support your theme.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie

Comment from donaldww

Excellent

I like your water quatrains, written as paired couplets. Water has a cleansing effect, evening watching and listening to one can feel like being in the shower. Allowing creativity to come out.

Cheers,
DW

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Deb. This entire presentation is marvelous in my opinion. I especially liked this stanza:

"With new spirit and refreshed mind
To myself, I can now be kind
Ridding myself of my self-doubt
Allows my creativity to come out"

Uplifting and inspirational. Bravo! Bob

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Robert Lee Brown

Exceptional

Debbie, I think this is a keeper. So far as I can tell, it is perfectly penned and with picture and poem make a perfect pair for presentation. I enjoyed the read and the message. Thanks for sharing this with your friend, Bob

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much, my friend. I am glad you enjoyed this one~Debbie

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Hi Debbie,
Nicely penned quatrains with solid rhyming sequence. Also really liked the message of wisdom not only inner self improvement but also for the rest of us too.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

I was about to give this a 4 star review because I wasn't finding any poetic devices other than a rhyme scheme and a little alliteration in the title, but then I caught "forever fill" for a little more alliteration. So it's sweet and sincere.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie

Comment from mizzkris20

Excellent

Wow!!!! I love this! I hope you don't mind me pointing out my total fav stanza

Gone are the worries of today
Tomorrow's not yet on the way
'Tis the time to listen and be still
And my soul will forever fill

Just beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie

Comment from JW

Excellent

This is an interesting poem. Before reading it I had not drawn a parallel between the falling water of a waterfall and the cleansing of one's soul.

Thanks for sharing this. JW

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie

Comment from RPFoster

Exceptional

Very lovely indeed, I can relate so well to your experience, my cleansing comes from walks in the rain, but I also frequent waterfalls. Very well written, I enjoyed how well it flowed.
Blessings 2u
Robert

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much. I am glad you enjoyed it~Debbie