Comment from krys123

Excellent

"When the pace which we live, (in) shows" shouldn't it be "(it) shows" I just thought it would sound a little better and make a little bit more sense? Debbie this is very beautifully written. I enjoyed it from the first verse to last and the rhyming and the rhythm is done so beautifully that it is so easy to read your poem. Thank you for sharing this well written piece.
You have a good one in God bless and may the sun always shine on your shoulder, Debbie.
AK

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

I'll take a look at that. Glad you enjoyed this and hope you are having a beautiful day! Debbie

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This ode to a day has nice mention of the creative as well innovative use of the moments gifted for living and the attitude with aptitude would work for the day offered to man that gives all opportunities. 02/821

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you~Debbie

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

I always enjoy your monorhyme quatrains, Debbie.

These have a nice positive outlook and perk up my outlook. (Unlike the many whiny posts about death, lost love, etc.)

'Mistakes will be left in the past' and 'I will take time for me' are my favorite lines. Sometimes hard things to remember though.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Remembering these gets easier with practice. Thanks, Ellen~Debbie

Comment from JW

Excellent

This is a very nice, uplifting poem. I wish we had a nice day today here. Unfortunately, here it is about an hour before I was planning to take my dog on a playdate - and there's a thunderstorm outside.

Thanks for sharing this well written poem. JW

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thanks, Jonathon. I hope tomorrow brings you some sun~Debbie

Comment from keimosobie

Excellent

Well written and I get the sense your are a high moral and very fine human being. I think you will create some nice art work. The poem is beautiful and well written.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much~Debbie

Comment from denhagan

Excellent

This was a great, uplifting poem to read, written in the quatrain form, with great rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem. Had an nice picture to accompany poem.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much~Debbie

reply by denhagan on 21-Aug-2013

You're welcome Debbie,
Dennis

Comment from SteveY

Excellent

Excellent job with this one in every way. Great job with the rhyming and wonderful rhythm and flow to this which made it an easy read. Perfect in every way!

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much~Debbie

Comment from emjaihammond

Excellent

There is a good rhyming scheme and the rhythm holds up quite well as one reads through this poem. It has a nice message and is easy enough to follow, making it enjoyable to read.

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 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much~Debbie

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Hi Debbie,
This has a wonderful realization of the beauty around you...life blooming seen with fresh insight.
I enjoyed this poem, well penned throughout.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

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 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much~Debbie