A Soldier of Christ
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Comment from SHIRLEY LEE
I cannot find any fault with this poem. You have a great gift. The gift of understanding. Thank you and God bless. Shirl
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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I cannot find any fault with this poem. You have a great gift. The gift of understanding. Thank you and God bless. Shirl
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Thanks shirl much appreciated ... !
Comment from bhogg
A fine read in almost biblical format, outlining the ongoing battle between Satan and Christ. If people would pause and look around, it's pretty hard to deny either one. Bill
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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A fine read in almost biblical format, outlining the ongoing battle between Satan and Christ. If people would pause and look around, it's pretty hard to deny either one. Bill
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Thanks Bill much appreciated.
Comment from MM lives on :)
Brilliant Bic, this is one of your finest in its raw forms. You love to write in Biblical form, the true metaphorical biblical form and not just Jesus and God. This is where you excel when you write from your heart. Keep em coming.
BRAVO, 777777777777777777777 STARS!!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Brilliant Bic, this is one of your finest in its raw forms. You love to write in Biblical form, the true metaphorical biblical form and not just Jesus and God. This is where you excel when you write from your heart. Keep em coming.
BRAVO, 777777777777777777777 STARS!!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Thanks Chris you know how I feel about it my friend ... thank you and the team for all the encouragement and love ... much blessings !
Comment from Treischel
Powerfully written free verse narrative piece about the battle enjoined between Lucifer and Christ, about the perils and about a soldier of Christ. It flows very smoothly and carries a profound message in a poetic journey about to begin. It tweaked my interest.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Powerfully written free verse narrative piece about the battle enjoined between Lucifer and Christ, about the perils and about a soldier of Christ. It flows very smoothly and carries a profound message in a poetic journey about to begin. It tweaked my interest.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Then it has done its job ... thank you and much appreciate the review and time ... !
Comment from Sueellen11
Amen awesome message, your words speak volumes the truth within, the evil one rules this fallen world, but his time is nigh, for that great and glorious day, when the king of kings shall defeat the evil and its powers upon this world, and the illuminati will give up its control and power for the pit of hell us ready for the bounded and chained ones great write, blessings be upon you and your writings, sueellen
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Amen awesome message, your words speak volumes the truth within, the evil one rules this fallen world, but his time is nigh, for that great and glorious day, when the king of kings shall defeat the evil and its powers upon this world, and the illuminati will give up its control and power for the pit of hell us ready for the bounded and chained ones great write, blessings be upon you and your writings, sueellen
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Thank you sueellen11 much appreciated as always and glad you could enjoy this one.
Comment from Jean C Chimfwembe
Yes, the war that is on earth is between good and evil and that is the reason the Son of God came to overcome darkness. Luckily He promised the Holy Spirit to come to our aid whenever we needed Him to fight evil.
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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Yes, the war that is on earth is between good and evil and that is the reason the Son of God came to overcome darkness. Luckily He promised the Holy Spirit to come to our aid whenever we needed Him to fight evil.
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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... that is true my friend ... thank you for your time and consideration in reviewing this piece.
Comment from songbyrd
This is very good writing and the message is strong. The Prince of darkness comes but to steal, kill and destroy..but Jesus is the Light and in Him there can be no darkness.
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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This is very good writing and the message is strong. The Prince of darkness comes but to steal, kill and destroy..but Jesus is the Light and in Him there can be no darkness.
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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... I am glad to say he is the true light, glad you could enjoy and much appreciate the review.
... bye the way T.G.A.O.T.U stands for:
(The Great Architect Of The Universe)
... which as you can see is not God as we know him or his Blessed Son, The Lord Jesus Christ.
