Will Work for Love
Some twists and turns on the romance highway18 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am a sucker for cute and this is extremely cute. I enjoyed reading this writing prompt entry. You did a job writing it. I am glad Susan didn't fall for the elaborate scheme but they are still going to have a date.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
I am a sucker for cute and this is extremely cute. I enjoyed reading this writing prompt entry. You did a job writing it. I am glad Susan didn't fall for the elaborate scheme but they are still going to have a date.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Glad you enjoyed it, the ultimate purpose of such writing. Thanks for reading!
Comment from chatterbox1
Oh no! I'm still laughing and blushing. What teen-aged girl hasn't had a variation of this fantasy?
You sure nailed this one. Christmas blessings,
Carol
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
Oh no! I'm still laughing and blushing. What teen-aged girl hasn't had a variation of this fantasy?
You sure nailed this one. Christmas blessings,
Carol
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thank you Carol, I appreciate your review and am glad you liked it.
Merry Christmas!🎄
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, very interesting. I would call it more humor, than romance. Also, that way the reader can overlook all the illegal and potential huge lawsuits.
I think you did a great job writing this and it came out prior to the #MeeToo movement.
Good writing.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
Hmm, very interesting. I would call it more humor, than romance. Also, that way the reader can overlook all the illegal and potential huge lawsuits.
I think you did a great job writing this and it came out prior to the #MeeToo movement.
Good writing.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Brilliant dialog--contestants who read this witty script will be relieved you missed the deadline. The banter is delightful--charming twist at the closer.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
Brilliant dialog--contestants who read this witty script will be relieved you missed the deadline. The banter is delightful--charming twist at the closer.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thank you, glad you liked it!
Comment from angelface2
Sorry if you missed the deadline, but I loved the story. I think you did an excellent job with just dialogue. I don't think I like entering those 24 hrs. contests. Never get the thing ready! I just missed 2 of them. lOL. Nice one Deniz. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2013
Sorry if you missed the deadline, but I loved the story. I think you did an excellent job with just dialogue. I don't think I like entering those 24 hrs. contests. Never get the thing ready! I just missed 2 of them. lOL. Nice one Deniz. Miss Sally
Comment Written 10-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much, Angelface2. Hope you're not just clowning around with me...:) Dennis
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Hahaha. No clowning around. Haven't done that in a long time. Thanks.
Comment from Hiqmat Humaidan
Delightfully entertaining
I loved it so much
I have to be honest though
I did get a little confused between who was saying what and had to read again, but its really fun and not too hard to follow I loved the humor in this romantic comedy You get a really good imagery going here
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2013
Delightfully entertaining
I loved it so much
I have to be honest though
I did get a little confused between who was saying what and had to read again, but its really fun and not too hard to follow I loved the humor in this romantic comedy You get a really good imagery going here
Comment Written 10-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2013
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If you found that confusing, you should have seen the first draft! :) Glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing! Dennis
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I read it again Its really nice I'd have to show my sister she likes romantic stories i might have to tell her to join
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cool! Great idea...Dennis
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:) i think she needs to write but she Keeps saying she has no time but she is really good
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Keep encouraging her, maybe let her post on your site?
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Oh yeah that's a great idea thank you xx :) she has often seen me on here she said lol u joined in 2007 and then didn't come back for a while i said i forgot about it lol too much facebook ha ha
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I understand...:)
Comment from GracieAnn
Deniz22, this Dialogue Only Prompt writing prompt entry has met the requirements of the contest in a convincing way by allowing the dialog to flow easily and simply. The twist is fun and creative at the end. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2013
Deniz22, this Dialogue Only Prompt writing prompt entry has met the requirements of the contest in a convincing way by allowing the dialog to flow easily and simply. The twist is fun and creative at the end. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
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Comment Written 10-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2013
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Thanks for the good wishes but as I said in my notes, I missed the entry. Glad you liked it nevertheless. Thanks, Dennis
Comment from B. Diehl
Great story. I'm sorry you missed the deadline, but don't let that get you down! You're a great writer! Chin up! Five stars!
-B<3
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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2013
Great story. I'm sorry you missed the deadline, but don't let that get you down! You're a great writer! Chin up! Five stars!
-B<3
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Comment Written 10-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2013
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:) Mother and I thank you...