5/7/5 (Leaves in Fright)
Leaves float back to tree, so frightened.121 total reviews
Comment from Louise Michelle
How clever this is! In keeping with the spooky spirit of Halloween you managed to come up with a cute and original piece. Well done, Linda. Hugs, Lou
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How clever this is! In keeping with the spooky spirit of Halloween you managed to come up with a cute and original piece. Well done, Linda. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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Thanks for reading, Lou. Linda
Comment from pbroussard209
Great poem I love the image of leave jumping back onto the trees. Must have been pretty fright full. The picture you chose is so cool it actually plays tricks with my eyes. I couldn't stop staring at it.
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Great poem I love the image of leave jumping back onto the trees. Must have been pretty fright full. The picture you chose is so cool it actually plays tricks with my eyes. I couldn't stop staring at it.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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I'm so glad that you enjoyed this piece. Thanks for reading and commenting. livelylinda
Comment from pattipac
Love your creative slant of how Nature deals with the fright of Halloween. Dead leave jumping back to cling to bare branches in fear paints such a visual affect.
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Love your creative slant of how Nature deals with the fright of Halloween. Dead leave jumping back to cling to bare branches in fear paints such a visual affect.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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Glad you liked this. Thanks for the six shiny stars! livelylinda
Comment from Auroraboreal800
Nicely done a 5-7-5 Poem. The artwork is absolutely beautiful and the message, as well. It said a lot in just a few lines. I enjoyed reading this poem, good luck in the contest!
:)
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Nicely done a 5-7-5 Poem. The artwork is absolutely beautiful and the message, as well. It said a lot in just a few lines. I enjoyed reading this poem, good luck in the contest!
:)
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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Didn't win the contest but I appreciate you reading and commenting on this poem. livelylinda
Comment from Norbanus
It must have been sad
to see the trees recover
Autumn lost its way
But still comes the snow
and drags them back to the ground
Goblins gone away
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It must have been sad
to see the trees recover
Autumn lost its way
But still comes the snow
and drags them back to the ground
Goblins gone away
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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Thanks for reading. livelylinda
Comment from mmayen
Wow!!!!! This is absolutely fantastic. It's very creative. It's indeed Halloween. I feel the fright of the leaves. Outstanding poem.
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Wow!!!!! This is absolutely fantastic. It's very creative. It's indeed Halloween. I feel the fright of the leaves. Outstanding poem.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much for your enthusiastic response. livelylinda
Comment from dmt1967
Very nice Halloween poem I like the idea of leaves jumping back onto trees in fright good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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Very nice Halloween poem I like the idea of leaves jumping back onto trees in fright good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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Didn't win the contest, but, thanks for reading. livelylinda
Comment from Tina McKala
ha ha this was very original approach to the topic of halloween. to show the fright through the leaves - that was an excellent twist!
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ha ha this was very original approach to the topic of halloween. to show the fright through the leaves - that was an excellent twist!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much. It wasn't enough to win the contest, though. livelylinda
Comment from kiwisteveh
Nice topical 5-7-5
You maintain the Halloween theme with dead and fright.
raw as used here gives a powerful punch to the end of your poem.
Good luck.
Steve
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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Nice topical 5-7-5
You maintain the Halloween theme with dead and fright.
raw as used here gives a powerful punch to the end of your poem.
Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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Thank you Steve. Appreciate your read and comments. I didn't win the contest. Linda
Comment from The Death
Hi,
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form with strong imagery.
Nice use of consonance of 'r' and 'd'.
You have presented it very well.
I liked it a lot:)
You did an amzing work!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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Hi,
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form with strong imagery.
Nice use of consonance of 'r' and 'd'.
You have presented it very well.
I liked it a lot:)
You did an amzing work!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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Thank you, Anupam Sharma. livelylinda