Comment from galaxytrooper

Good

Lovely... just my opinion of course but perhaps not use the word measure more than once? (Faith is okay though) and keep the tempo a little more even as it jumps a bit and takes attention away from your words.

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 Comment Written 05-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2013

Thank you for reading and reviewing; hadn't really noticed a double of measure. Blessings, Kay.

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

I just do reviews to get my certificates and etc I can't afford to spend money either. when I get enough to do what I want then I spend those fake dollars to get into contests and such. you a a great lady

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2013

Hello Barb, Without the reviews we wouldn't be able to enter contests and such. Thanks for reading my friend, :-) Kay.

reply by country ranch writer on 06-Dec-2013

WELCOME

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

I loved your Faith poetry contest entry. It is beautifully written. Your message very clear. Your talent very evident. Best of luck in the contest and please continue to bless us with your writings.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2013

Cajungirl, Thanks so much for your interest in my poem. It has taken me five years of reviewing to reach the recognised writer - I am proud of my achievements. Blessings, Kay.

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

Hi Kay,

I love your poem and your author notes. Wonderful that your faith has brought you to where you are. You know that I share that same faith.

Love,
Lois

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2013

Hello Lovey Lois, Thank you for reading, I am not puffed up with myself, merely proud of my achievements. Bless you, Kay.

reply by mumsyone on 06-Dec-2013

There's nothing wrong with being proud of your achievements, especially when you attribute them to God and your faith in Him, as do I. We are two peas in a pod, heading in the same direction!

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

solid use of abab rhyming
good internal rhyme in measure of pleasure
good alliteration in measure/money/make me
and in dollars dear
and in follow/faith/filled
to have faith in one's own talents - that is indeed cause for celebration :-) Brooke

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 Comment Written 05-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2013

Hello my friend Brooke, Thank you for reading and editing. Someone said I shouldn't use the same word twice? I didn't even notice that I used 'measure' twice. Bless you, Kay.

reply by adewpearl on 06-Dec-2013

I have had people tell me about repeating a word in my work quite a few times - very often I've repeated the word on purpose for effect. I've just learned some people have a "thing" about any repetition. It doesn't bother me.

reply by the author on 06-Dec-2013

It bothered him - gave me 4stars for using it twice! LOL.