To You My Love
5-7-5 heartfelt21 total reviews
Comment from rouskin
Unconditional love very well depicted. Perfect artwork too.
I enjoyed reading it. Best of luck in your contest. Thank you for sharing and have a great week
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
Unconditional love very well depicted. Perfect artwork too.
I enjoyed reading it. Best of luck in your contest. Thank you for sharing and have a great week
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thanks so much for your wonderful review and good wishes, it is most appreciated.
Comment from Cycler
Nice presentation in picture, word and form. Syllable count is perfect and the thoughts certainly do express a wonderful love. Good work!
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
Nice presentation in picture, word and form. Syllable count is perfect and the thoughts certainly do express a wonderful love. Good work!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much for you review and kind comments, most appreciated
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your words allow the reader to see and feel that your heart will give all in the endless possibilities
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
good luck in the contest
your words allow the reader to see and feel that your heart will give all in the endless possibilities
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you for a wonderful review and your well wishes, most appreciated.
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welcome...SC
Comment from in777wr#
A very well written love poem. What more could be said in this poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. Your poem flows, and reads well. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
A very well written love poem. What more could be said in this poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. Your poem flows, and reads well. Nicely written.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much for your generous review, it is very appreciated.
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You're welcome.
Comment from donaldcolson
Inevitable love poems are idealistic and unrealistic. But who would give their all. Shouldn't something be kept in reserve? don
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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
Inevitable love poems are idealistic and unrealistic. But who would give their all. Shouldn't something be kept in reserve? don
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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No, my friend, when you love you feed off each other... that's is what love is... giving your all.
Thank you very much for your review, it is most appreciated.
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Maybe I should have married you! don
Comment from TonyD
There are endless possibilities in love and the feeling springs from the heart. The poem is reflective of the poet's mind at work in expressing love so flawlessly and in so few words.
TonyD
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
There are endless possibilities in love and the feeling springs from the heart. The poem is reflective of the poet's mind at work in expressing love so flawlessly and in so few words.
TonyD
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much for your very kind review, it is most appreciated.
Comment from DonandVicki
One of the best 5-7-5 poems that I have reviewed as of yet. Nice flow to so short composure which I'm sure is not easy. Don
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
One of the best 5-7-5 poems that I have reviewed as of yet. Nice flow to so short composure which I'm sure is not easy. Don
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much for saying... a very kind and inspiring review, most appreciated.
Comment from tfawcus
Love, truly, is giving all of our endless possibilities to another, which is why it is so important to find someone who will nurture them and make them grow.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
Love, truly, is giving all of our endless possibilities to another, which is why it is so important to find someone who will nurture them and make them grow.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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So true, and I am one of the lucky ones who experience these exact feelings... a truly wonderful review, thank you.
Comment from Allblockout
In a few lines I can feel the love coming from this poem,the words have great meaning and flow so well in this poem,Great poem well done :)
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
In a few lines I can feel the love coming from this poem,the words have great meaning and flow so well in this poem,Great poem well done :)
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you for this kind and insightful review it is very appreciated.
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You are very welcome :)
Comment from Cajungirl
All seventeen syllables and three lines are very well expresses of heartfelt love. This is an excellent contest entry. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
All seventeen syllables and three lines are very well expresses of heartfelt love. This is an excellent contest entry. Best of luck.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you for your kind review and your well wishes, it is very appreciated.
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U R welcome