What does it sound like
a 5-7-5 poem14 total reviews
Comment from playinaround
It sounds like drunk driving to me. The tragedy and horror of senseless death. Is this the meaning? Maybe I'm off, but this is my interpretation. Very cleverly done. I really like the message given.
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It sounds like drunk driving to me. The tragedy and horror of senseless death. Is this the meaning? Maybe I'm off, but this is my interpretation. Very cleverly done. I really like the message given.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This tells a sad story, beginning to end, and shows (by the picture) exactly where it winds up. Syllable count and form are correct. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
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This tells a sad story, beginning to end, and shows (by the picture) exactly where it winds up. Syllable count and form are correct. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
Comment from lakeport
What does it sound like, indeed drinking and driving does not mix, that's a touching 5/7/5 poem.Thanks for sharing.God bless you. Lakeport.
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What does it sound like, indeed drinking and driving does not mix, that's a touching 5/7/5 poem.Thanks for sharing.God bless you. Lakeport.
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Comment Written 29-Jan-2014
Comment from Janie King
Oh my, this is one that paints a very strong and vivid picture for your readers and kind of stops them in their tracks. Good job. God loves you and I do too.
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Oh my, this is one that paints a very strong and vivid picture for your readers and kind of stops them in their tracks. Good job. God loves you and I do too.
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Comment Written 29-Jan-2014