Memory Lane
Quatrains 10/10/10/10 abcb15 total reviews
Comment from krys123
This is a very excellently a written poem And has a great topic to which to work upon. You handled the context very well in your rhyming quatrains were very well done and neither of your rhymes were forced, labored or strained. The rhythm was smooth and flowed very well which made it easy for me to read your poem clearly. Thank you for sharing and posting your poem for everyone. May you a years be blessed always...
Alex
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
  |
This is a very excellently a written poem And has a great topic to which to work upon. You handled the context very well in your rhyming quatrains were very well done and neither of your rhymes were forced, labored or strained. The rhythm was smooth and flowed very well which made it easy for me to read your poem clearly. Thank you for sharing and posting your poem for everyone. May you a years be blessed always...
Alex
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
-
Thank you so much my friend. Take care and have a blessed day~Debbie
-
You are so sincerely welcome Debbie.....
Comment from royowen
As usual, your writing is an outstanding example of what power words really have! In biblical scripture, God says that our prayers rise as sweet incense in His nostrils, and our tears are stored in jars! ( Mine must fill a reservoir ) Beautifully crafted work, with an admirable versatility displayed! Great simple language but with a depth of meaning! Great rhyme scheme, ( my favourite ) and the Rhythm is tight! Well done, Debbie, my friend, PS I wish they dished out more "6"s.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
|
As usual, your writing is an outstanding example of what power words really have! In biblical scripture, God says that our prayers rise as sweet incense in His nostrils, and our tears are stored in jars! ( Mine must fill a reservoir ) Beautifully crafted work, with an admirable versatility displayed! Great simple language but with a depth of meaning! Great rhyme scheme, ( my favourite ) and the Rhythm is tight! Well done, Debbie, my friend, PS I wish they dished out more "6"s.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
-
Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Nosha17
This was a very nicely written poem with lovely imagery about past memories of loved ones. You have made good use of language and rhyme and it flowed along very smoothly. Most enjoyable. I haven't seen you on fan story for a while, nice to read one of your works again. Faye
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
|
This was a very nicely written poem with lovely imagery about past memories of loved ones. You have made good use of language and rhyme and it flowed along very smoothly. Most enjoyable. I haven't seen you on fan story for a while, nice to read one of your works again. Faye
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
-
Thank you for your kind and supportive words and review. I took a short trip through depression, but am trying to climb out of it~DEbbie
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, Debbie, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain poem about the memories that we all fall back upon, both good and bad. I enjoyed reading it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
|
this is very well written, Debbie, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain poem about the memories that we all fall back upon, both good and bad. I enjoyed reading it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
-
Thank you. my friend~Debbie
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Yes! Well said! Today we are forming the memories we will look at tomorrow. We never stop creating them. The old ones may be dusty, but they are preserved in time and cannot be tossed away. I guess life ends up like an old attic, with all the clutter making us who we are. Great way to think of it. You really got my interest here... will never see "today" the same way. Thanks for sharing your insights. :)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
|
Yes! Well said! Today we are forming the memories we will look at tomorrow. We never stop creating them. The old ones may be dusty, but they are preserved in time and cannot be tossed away. I guess life ends up like an old attic, with all the clutter making us who we are. Great way to think of it. You really got my interest here... will never see "today" the same way. Thanks for sharing your insights. :)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
-
I try hard not to obsess about my past. It has made me who I am today, both the good and bad. Thank you so much, my friend. I picture my brain as a collection of file cabinets, with some of them not alphabetized. Take care, my friend~Debbie