My Sweet Lullaby
To Love only You...16 total reviews
Comment from Nosha17
A very nice love poem, with good choice of words and rhyme. It created a peaceful atmosphere and feeling of love. Good illustration and enjoyable read. Faye
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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A very nice love poem, with good choice of words and rhyme. It created a peaceful atmosphere and feeling of love. Good illustration and enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 14-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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Thank you Faye. Hugs.
Nichola
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Nichola - this has that steamy visual appeal with your words perfectly placed - nice emotion and overall I find this holds a bit of excitement with your building up to your last line.
Really well done - I enjoyed it.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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Dear Nichola - this has that steamy visual appeal with your words perfectly placed - nice emotion and overall I find this holds a bit of excitement with your building up to your last line.
Really well done - I enjoyed it.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 14-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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I appreciate your exquisite review, Maureen, Many hugs.
Nichola
Comment from RodG
This short quatrain is a very tender Valentine message. The Speaker obviously has deep feelings for his sweet heart as a single kiss causes him to dream of her, and she has the power to launch a thousand ships like Helen of Troy. But I really like the simplicity of stanza 2 and can see them together sharing a cup of coffee on a cold winter's night. The rhythm stumbles a bit in your final line (You might want to choose a shorter word than Serendipity), but otherwise your cadence is melodic throughout.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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This short quatrain is a very tender Valentine message. The Speaker obviously has deep feelings for his sweet heart as a single kiss causes him to dream of her, and she has the power to launch a thousand ships like Helen of Troy. But I really like the simplicity of stanza 2 and can see them together sharing a cup of coffee on a cold winter's night. The rhythm stumbles a bit in your final line (You might want to choose a shorter word than Serendipity), but otherwise your cadence is melodic throughout.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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Thank you, Rod, for your awesome review. I will think about your suggestions.
Nichola
Comment from fastdigits
Ah, that time of the year where
words of love are whispered
and a flower adorns her hair
and all is right with the
world.
Wel done
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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Ah, that time of the year where
words of love are whispered
and a flower adorns her hair
and all is right with the
world.
Wel done
Comment Written 14-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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Thank you for your kind words of love and great review.
Nichola
Comment from lindalcreel
This is most appropriate for Valentine's Day. Love, love, love the picture. You could see the intensity in both of them as they draw nearer for that one kiss which will lead to the passion that they are both feeling. You have such a gift. Sometimes I can feel my heart breaking when I read your poetry, other times I can feel the warmth and love in the short stories that you have created. Thanks so much for sharing. Wishing you a very happy Valentine's day filled with hugs and kisses.
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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This is most appropriate for Valentine's Day. Love, love, love the picture. You could see the intensity in both of them as they draw nearer for that one kiss which will lead to the passion that they are both feeling. You have such a gift. Sometimes I can feel my heart breaking when I read your poetry, other times I can feel the warmth and love in the short stories that you have created. Thanks so much for sharing. Wishing you a very happy Valentine's day filled with hugs and kisses.
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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Linda, Thank you for your beautiful review. I am really touched that my poetry can have that emotional effect upon the reader. Deeply appreciated. Happy Valentine's Day to you too.
Nichola
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Always a pleasure, Nichola.
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So welcome:)
Comment from angelface2
What a sweet valentine, my friend. The rhythm and rhymes are very good. My sweet lullaby is so lovely, I think. Great write. Miss Sally
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What a sweet valentine, my friend. The rhythm and rhymes are very good. My sweet lullaby is so lovely, I think. Great write. Miss Sally
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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Miss Sally, Thank you for your great review and kind words. Happy Valentine's Day.
Nichola
