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Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Spring's Delight"5/7/5 poems
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Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This meets all the qualifications of the contest prompt as to form and syllable count. I like the phrase "spring's musical breath." Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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This meets all the qualifications of the contest prompt as to form and syllable count. I like the phrase "spring's musical breath." Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from me_tudor
I loved this poem, Anupam. I still have a little trouble getting these short poems, but this one was completely easy to understand. And, I loved the picture you chose for it! Excellent job!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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I loved this poem, Anupam. I still have a little trouble getting these short poems, but this one was completely easy to understand. And, I loved the picture you chose for it! Excellent job!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Glad you enjoyed this one as well. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Loren (7)
It has been said that music is balm to the soul and so we breathe deep the breath of spring and yes, it is nascent - a new beginning the chants of the newborn. Nice job. Loren
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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It has been said that music is balm to the soul and so we breathe deep the breath of spring and yes, it is nascent - a new beginning the chants of the newborn. Nice job. Loren
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Glad you enjoyed this.I agree with you--music is enchanting. Thank you for this lovely review. :)
Comment from DonandVicki
A very lovely tribute to the onset of spring and the freshness that the feeling brings. Nicely composed 5-7-5 . Nicely chosen photograph that you chose to enhance your work. Don
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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A very lovely tribute to the onset of spring and the freshness that the feeling brings. Nicely composed 5-7-5 . Nicely chosen photograph that you chose to enhance your work. Don
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Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you for this lovely review.