Happy Child
5-7-5 senryu17 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
Aw-w-w-w-w-w, what an adorable little baby! Playing peek-a-boo! behind a bath towel...
Your well written senryu certainly captures the sweet, innocent essence of infants, be they boy, or girl.
Well done, Mystery Poet, and best of luck to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Aw-w-w-w-w-w, what an adorable little baby! Playing peek-a-boo! behind a bath towel...
Your well written senryu certainly captures the sweet, innocent essence of infants, be they boy, or girl.
Well done, Mystery Poet, and best of luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from kiwijenny
Just so adorable...I got my grandson belly laughing...the forts laughter...both parents came running ...they had not heard him do that before...when I want to smile I think of those peals of innocent joy ...
God bless you ..I love this
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Just so adorable...I got my grandson belly laughing...the forts laughter...both parents came running ...they had not heard him do that before...when I want to smile I think of those peals of innocent joy ...
God bless you ..I love this
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
you have all the right components for the contest
your few words allow the reader to see and feel the laughing child as a gift from God
yes all children are a gift from God
cheers..Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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good luck in the contest
you have all the right components for the contest
your few words allow the reader to see and feel the laughing child as a gift from God
yes all children are a gift from God
cheers..Smoothiecool
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
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most welcome..SC
Comment from judester
Joyous is the perfect word to describe children I think. A cute haiku to remind us that our children truly are a gift. Good luck with the contest. ps The child is as cute as a speckled pup in a hat.
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Joyous is the perfect word to describe children I think. A cute haiku to remind us that our children truly are a gift. Good luck with the contest. ps The child is as cute as a speckled pup in a hat.
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from casini
Child a gift of God, when the child is happy, makes all of us happy and the eyes as said...
dark eyes sparkle with delight....
Becomes so mystical, it mystifies our mind. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Child a gift of God, when the child is happy, makes all of us happy and the eyes as said...
dark eyes sparkle with delight....
Becomes so mystical, it mystifies our mind. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Jackarrie
Joyous laughing child
dark eyes sparkle with delight
a blessing from God
An absolutely beautiful photo, and your poem goes with it so well, Good luck in the contest Mary
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reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Joyous laughing child
dark eyes sparkle with delight
a blessing from God
An absolutely beautiful photo, and your poem goes with it so well, Good luck in the contest Mary
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Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Glasstruth
A child is the greatest gift anyone could imagine. It's life. Something created from love, and the now guides the future from this blessing. Great stuff! Good luck with the contest. Les
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reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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A child is the greatest gift anyone could imagine. It's life. Something created from love, and the now guides the future from this blessing. Great stuff! Good luck with the contest. Les
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Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
