The Trining
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "COUNCIL ORATORY"A man must discover his identity and destiny.
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Comment from Walter L. Jones
So a little out there, but a story teller with the children at your feet. Magic with who and a smile in the shadows of need, but whose need, life and death a strange thing left open, experienced once, from the web forward... Walt
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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So a little out there, but a story teller with the children at your feet. Magic with who and a smile in the shadows of need, but whose need, life and death a strange thing left open, experienced once, from the web forward... Walt
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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You are spoiling me with the glittering greenie, Walt. But I honor it and your ever-the-poetic words of praise. I thank you so much, friend.
Comment from c_lucas
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. I am impressed.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. I am impressed.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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Wow! Charlie, when someone as capable as you is impressed ... well, I am humbled. Thank you so much -- and the 6-er is a bonus!
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You're welcome, Jay. Charlie
Comment from Herkjv1611
Though the culture of the chapter seem ancient as it was,it is not political,not judging.It sounds the early oratorical tones of getting recognized of the Council of the Far South.The citizens hope for protecting the Kabeezan soil.Oration is a kind of speech of persuading the group.I like oratorical versions.The chapter has many elements.Good and commendable work for an award.Great work!
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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Though the culture of the chapter seem ancient as it was,it is not political,not judging.It sounds the early oratorical tones of getting recognized of the Council of the Far South.The citizens hope for protecting the Kabeezan soil.Oration is a kind of speech of persuading the group.I like oratorical versions.The chapter has many elements.Good and commendable work for an award.Great work!
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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I am so humbled by your kind words. I'm tickled you found it so entertaining and worthy of an award. I hope you plan to visit again. The coffee's on.
Comment from DanielEkine
The narrative of this story is very well written.
The description of each character by the author is very beneficial.
This author has a great mind and it shows in their work.
SPAG execution is remarkable.
""Thank you." I glanced over to the water pitcher on a tray with three glasses around it. "I'm wondering if I might help myself to a glass of water."
"How inhospitable of us!" Gylo said, blushing to the roots of his silver hair." A beautiful dialogue execution.
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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The narrative of this story is very well written.
The description of each character by the author is very beneficial.
This author has a great mind and it shows in their work.
SPAG execution is remarkable.
""Thank you." I glanced over to the water pitcher on a tray with three glasses around it. "I'm wondering if I might help myself to a glass of water."
"How inhospitable of us!" Gylo said, blushing to the roots of his silver hair." A beautiful dialogue execution.
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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Thank you, Daniel. So glad to have you back with me here on the Trining. Come back often.
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I absolutely will.