The Trining
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "A TRANSFER OF POWER"A man must discover his identity and destiny.
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Comment from c_lucas
Sometimes the lowly private have more ability to command than the commanding officer. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very strong read.
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
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Sometimes the lowly private have more ability to command than the commanding officer. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very strong read.
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
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Thank you, Charlie. Appreciated.
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You're welcome, Jay. Charlie
Comment from chasennov
"A TRANSFER OF POWER" I enjoyed the easy flow of words in this excellent chapter you have created here. I liked the formulation and I thought the structure was well worth it. Good job.
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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"A TRANSFER OF POWER" I enjoyed the easy flow of words in this excellent chapter you have created here. I liked the formulation and I thought the structure was well worth it. Good job.
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Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Thank you for reading, your kind words and your beautiful stars. All are appreciated.
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You are most welcome.