Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is a cute poem, mystery writer, the perfect imagery of the playful nature of kittens and watching them interact with each other and their pet humans, lol. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem Thanks for the great review.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

the poem is cute and fun but has a couple of errors in the 1st stanza. wont - won't; i'd - I'd. good luck to you.
teresa``

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Thanks Teresa for the excellent review, I have rectified the error. I appreciate it.

Comment from lookgodallday

Excellent

I love having pets. This one just touches me for all you've written here really describes a kitten which so cute, cuddly and sweet. I love your choice of word. Whatever emotions you wanted to impart in this poem, you truly succeeded. keep on writing and good luck to the competition.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem Thanks for the great review.

Comment from sibhus

Excellent

Wonderful job of filling the requirements for this prompt. This is really a cute little poem filled with those amusing antics of kittens all put to rhyme with an eduring charm. I can see the adorable little mite scampering to jion you in bed at night. Good poem and good luckw with the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Thanks you so much I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem Thanks for the great review.

Comment from brentman99

Excellent

An interesting poem. I like the image and also like the story. However, you have a few issues, your punctuation comments aside:

wont - won't

i'd - I'd

capitol - capital

Overall, I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Brent.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Thanks for the excellent review, I have rectified the error. I appreciate it.

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Two kittens are half as destructive as one, who will vent his high spirits on his environment, not his pal. Same with
pups. Hide away, two words, I think. Neat pic.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem Thanks for the great review.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is purrr-fect. I love kittens, Would love to have one, but don't have enough money to provide for pets, so I will just enjoy pictures of others kittens (cat as the do grow up) This was a fun read. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 02-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014

I like it Purr-fect. great review thanks.