Lord, Help Me Wait On You
Learning to wait upon the Lord.15 total reviews
Comment from MizKat
Hi Patricia,
This is a really nice poem and the clock fits it perfectly as you're asking the Lord to help you wait on Him. You come up with some great ideas for your poetry and you write them very well. I haven't read a poem of yours that I didn't like.
Kat
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
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Hi Patricia,
This is a really nice poem and the clock fits it perfectly as you're asking the Lord to help you wait on Him. You come up with some great ideas for your poetry and you write them very well. I haven't read a poem of yours that I didn't like.
Kat
Comment Written 21-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
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Thanks Kat for the nice review. I felt the clock was a good photo to go with the work.
Comment from emrpoems
A wonderful prayer of supplication and one that unveils the unselfish nature of the author. though you ask for blessings you are willing to share with others.
an enjoyable read and strong message to those of us who may tend to be selfish
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
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A wonderful prayer of supplication and one that unveils the unselfish nature of the author. though you ask for blessings you are willing to share with others.
an enjoyable read and strong message to those of us who may tend to be selfish
Comment Written 21-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
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I wrote this as a prayer as I was waiting for the healing in my eyes. My surgery on the eye went well and the vision in the left eye is better than it has been in 5 years.
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Praise Jesus and stay blessed
Comment from K. Lorraine
This was a lovely prayer in the guise of a poem. I was browsing through the FS reading material as time approaches to leave for church services and I thought this might be a nice prelude to get me in the frame of mind to let go of my worries and other stresses of the day. Thank you for bringing about a calmness in my heart through your written word. God has blessed you with a wonderful talent and you never fail to put it to good use. God bless you... Your friend, K. Lorraine
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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
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This was a lovely prayer in the guise of a poem. I was browsing through the FS reading material as time approaches to leave for church services and I thought this might be a nice prelude to get me in the frame of mind to let go of my worries and other stresses of the day. Thank you for bringing about a calmness in my heart through your written word. God has blessed you with a wonderful talent and you never fail to put it to good use. God bless you... Your friend, K. Lorraine
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Comment Written 21-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
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Thanks for the nice review. I am glad it was a blessing to you as you prepared for church services. I wrote it as a prayer while I was waiting the healing of my eyes.
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It was a good church service too. God Bless...
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I am glad it was a good service. I hope my eyes will allow me to drive to church tomorrow morning.
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Take care, especially if you are in any of the winter storm areas. I live in Florida, so it's sunshine and 80 tomorrow. I didn't mean to rub road salt into any open wounds. Have a good Sunday. K. L.
Comment from mbagby23
On time God, my not come when we want to. But, always on time. I don't mind waiting as on gospel singer song. We need not to complain while we wait. Thankful and graceful for were we are in life and what we have.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
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On time God, my not come when we want to. But, always on time. I don't mind waiting as on gospel singer song. We need not to complain while we wait. Thankful and graceful for were we are in life and what we have.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
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Thanks for the lovely review, I appreciate it greatly.
Comment from tfawcus
This is a supplication worthy of Mary Magdalene. What a strong and calming prayer to wake up to on this scorching Sunday morning in South Australia. May the Lord be with you today and always.
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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
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This is a supplication worthy of Mary Magdalene. What a strong and calming prayer to wake up to on this scorching Sunday morning in South Australia. May the Lord be with you today and always.
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Comment Written 21-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
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Thanks for the review and I am glad it was a blessing to you. I wrote it as a prayer as I was waiting for the healing of my eyes.