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Comment from Gloria ....
Author, just a brilliant antonym poem. Very clever indeed. Yep and there is a lot of truth in this poem of yours so you got my vote, nice job!
Gloria
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Author, just a brilliant antonym poem. Very clever indeed. Yep and there is a lot of truth in this poem of yours so you got my vote, nice job!
Gloria
Comment Written 07-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thank you, Gloria, for the terrific review.
Comment from royowen
A very clever twist on the theme of opposites in this antonym poetry contest, I like the lightening of the effect that some entries might have in this interesting contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
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A very clever twist on the theme of opposites in this antonym poetry contest, I like the lightening of the effect that some entries might have in this interesting contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 07-May-2015
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Thank you, Roy, for the excellent review.
Comment from JM
Very clever play of words. Forgive me that I don't get what the picture is. But, I like your poem because it makes the reader think. I like writes that stimulate the brain. :)
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Very clever play of words. Forgive me that I don't get what the picture is. But, I like your poem because it makes the reader think. I like writes that stimulate the brain. :)
Comment Written 07-May-2015
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Thank you, JM, for the outstanding review.
Comment from RADH!KA
I like the left-right antonym concept that you have chosen. Infact wrong-right antonym pair also exists in your poem !
'Who will be left if everyone is wrong?' is a concept which can be applied to many situations..Nice.
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I like the left-right antonym concept that you have chosen. Infact wrong-right antonym pair also exists in your poem !
'Who will be left if everyone is wrong?' is a concept which can be applied to many situations..Nice.
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Comment Written 07-May-2015
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Thank you.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-An interesting image.
-You followed the directions given in the prompt.
-I liked your choice of "Left" for your initial word.
-The play on "wrong" in your middle lines is great.
-Great antonym in "Right".
-Well done and very creative.
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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-An interesting image.
-You followed the directions given in the prompt.
-I liked your choice of "Left" for your initial word.
-The play on "wrong" in your middle lines is great.
-Great antonym in "Right".
-Well done and very creative.
Comment Written 07-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thank you, respa, for the excellent review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from BJ_Barnes
Great poem! You did an excellent job of conveying your message in very little words, which can be difficult. It flowed together wonderfully. Thank you for sharing it.
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Great poem! You did an excellent job of conveying your message in very little words, which can be difficult. It flowed together wonderfully. Thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 07-May-2015
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Thank you, BJ, for the encouraging review.
Comment from Jean Lutz
Political? Religious? Your words give food for thought. Very intriguing artwork that harmonizes well with the message. I wish you well with the entry.
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Political? Religious? Your words give food for thought. Very intriguing artwork that harmonizes well with the message. I wish you well with the entry.
Comment Written 07-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thank you, Jean, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a sarcastic poem that seems to be written about a person who thinks he or she is always right. Saying sooner or later he/she will be all alone because no one will be right for that person.
It uses two antonyms. Left and right and right and wrong. It also tells us that this person is wrong to think he/she is always right.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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This is a sarcastic poem that seems to be written about a person who thinks he or she is always right. Saying sooner or later he/she will be all alone because no one will be right for that person.
It uses two antonyms. Left and right and right and wrong. It also tells us that this person is wrong to think he/she is always right.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 07-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thank you DP, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Praise000
Hie,
You have managed to say a lot in only a
few words.
"Left? ...Who will be left...if everyone is wrong?...
Right?" All the best in your writing.
from Praise000
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Hie,
You have managed to say a lot in only a
few words.
"Left? ...Who will be left...if everyone is wrong?...
Right?" All the best in your writing.
from Praise000
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Comment Written 07-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thank you, Praise000, for the kind review. Bill
