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Tiny Tales of Terror

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Multi-authored book of flash/micro horror fiction

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Don't Feed the Animals
by dejohnsrld (Debbie)

~Ha! This is funny and creepy at the same time. I have this picture in my head of yellow eyes staring at me from the dark stairs. Was the killer a tiger? Well done!

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2015


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
    In my imagination, but I left it up to the reader to decide. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from w.j.debi
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First comes the allure of the comfort of her past pets bringing her fond memories and a calming feeling. Then the terror comes when it is too late to do anything about it.

Well done.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2015


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
    Thank you, my friend. Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Eeeew, Debbie...

_ Gross---but a darn good story!
_ You're getting very good at his genre of storytelling.
_ I almost thought it would be okay----but of course, not a 'Tales of Terror' story.
_ Did you realize you have 'General Fiction' for the category, instead of 'Horror?'
_ Great job, my friend.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2015


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
    Thank you, my friend. I think Dean has warped my mind~Debbie
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Creeeeepy. Glad I don't have a cat.. cant trust the little devils. I sure hope my little doggies won't come back to kill me after they're gone. They would lick me to death probably since they're so loving.

But cats... well, we all know how evil they can be, working for witches and all. She should have had a doggie. :)

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 Comment Written 10-Aug-2015


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
    I agree. If cats were going to kill me, it wouldn't be hard. I have had quite a few over the years, but have decided beagles are the best. Katie is helping me write this. I think she wants to do another story ... Thank you, my friend~Debbie with lap-side assistance from Katie Jo :)
reply by Phyllis Stewart on 10-Aug-2015
    Good. I love Katie Jo. My dogs have no interest in writing. They just sleep as I sit here. :)
Comment from barkingdog
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Debbie--now that's just wrong. lol
All of her dead pets show up for a family reunion, and she doesn't even have time to say hello, before you kill her off with some strange entity attacker.
You do have a feel for these 'Tiny Tales.'

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 Comment Written 10-Aug-2015


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
    I think Dean has done irreparable damage to my brain. These are a lot of fun. Have a good night, my friend.

    I think I will try to get some sleep~Debbie with lap-side assistance from Katie Jo :)