The Majesty of Creation
A free verse philosophical26 total reviews
Comment from Mark Valentine
What a positive exhortation you have penned. It inspires folks to be open to miracles withiin and without. It reminds me of Einstein's wuote that one can act as if nothing is a miracle or as is everything is. You capture the truth that attitude is everything, and that embracing the wonder of life and power of our ability to create is the way to go.thanks for sharing such a positive piece.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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What a positive exhortation you have penned. It inspires folks to be open to miracles withiin and without. It reminds me of Einstein's wuote that one can act as if nothing is a miracle or as is everything is. You capture the truth that attitude is everything, and that embracing the wonder of life and power of our ability to create is the way to go.thanks for sharing such a positive piece.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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Hi Mark and High Marks for your review here! Much appreciated to be sure and glad to meet you. I hope we will share many thoughts and words in the future. Kindest personal regards, HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo that complements your poem perfectly, a joy to read and review. Keep still love, then you will hear the whispers. Find truth and enlightenment. You can create, God gave you that gift.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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Excellent photo that complements your poem perfectly, a joy to read and review. Keep still love, then you will hear the whispers. Find truth and enlightenment. You can create, God gave you that gift.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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Thanks robina: it's always a delight to hear from you and I appreciate your kind thoughts! Vance
Comment from royowen
I once wrote a poem similar to this theme, that the gifts with which gave us in great abundance were meant to spent and shared and if we do He will He will give us great things to share. The other thing that applies to your prose piece is the marvellous, beautiful and complex creation that God has lavished on us! Well Vance, marvellously articulate write, with a superb eloquence that match the descriptive beauty the equal of anything, well done dear brother, blessings, Roym
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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I once wrote a poem similar to this theme, that the gifts with which gave us in great abundance were meant to spent and shared and if we do He will He will give us great things to share. The other thing that applies to your prose piece is the marvellous, beautiful and complex creation that God has lavished on us! Well Vance, marvellously articulate write, with a superb eloquence that match the descriptive beauty the equal of anything, well done dear brother, blessings, Roym
Comment Written 17-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much Roy as your words and thoughts are always a gift so many ways....I actually did think of you while writing this BTW! Blessings dear friend! Vance
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As are yours dear brother, you have an unmatched eloquence my friend, Roy
Comment from LeslieP5
This poem speaks to me personally having gone through a rough relationship breakup and then grief upon learning that he passed away at way to young an age. I have had a problem shaking the sadness and the regrets at not handling certain things that happened between us better. There was no communication or closure so it has been hard to shake. This poem is a good reminder to look at the blessings and beauty of God's creations and to focus on gratitude and the positives we can create rather than dwelling in an unhappy past. Thank yo for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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This poem speaks to me personally having gone through a rough relationship breakup and then grief upon learning that he passed away at way to young an age. I have had a problem shaking the sadness and the regrets at not handling certain things that happened between us better. There was no communication or closure so it has been hard to shake. This poem is a good reminder to look at the blessings and beauty of God's creations and to focus on gratitude and the positives we can create rather than dwelling in an unhappy past. Thank yo for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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Dear Leslie: thank you so very much for your kind reflections on this work and I do indeed hope that it brought you some measure of peace in light of your difficulties. I must say that there is only one place where the mind is absolutely 'BULLETPROOF" and that is in a state of GRATITUDE! please share it with me always!! His Grayness: Vance
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The Majesty of Creation
by His Grayness
I see how you compare the beauty of creation to a beautiful flower and how we can understand we are beautiful creations of God too. Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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The Majesty of Creation
by His Grayness
I see how you compare the beauty of creation to a beautiful flower and how we can understand we are beautiful creations of God too. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much Gypsy Blue Rose: I do sincerely appreciate your kind remarks and I"m so glad that you did enjoy this work. My mission is to PROMOTE GRATITUDE and each reflection of that working makes me very happy (and also full of gratitude) so thanks for that gift! Blessings! Vance
Comment from Dean Kuch
What lovely, sincere and heartfelt sentiments you've expressed here in you frolicking, fanciful free verse, Vance.
I echo those very same sentiments your way, my friend.
Well done. ~Dean
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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What lovely, sincere and heartfelt sentiments you've expressed here in you frolicking, fanciful free verse, Vance.
I echo those very same sentiments your way, my friend.
Well done. ~Dean
Comment Written 16-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much Dean! I'm honored and delighted that you liked this and hope to see you again soon Vance
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You too, my friend. It's been awhile.
~Dean
Comment from poetadeu
Magnificent words tailored toward a task for
which He has conditioned us to if we, but pick
up our gifts and create of our own a new and
correct destination. 'He leadeth thee', if we
will follow. Your words are very inspirational.
Thank you...
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Magnificent words tailored toward a task for
which He has conditioned us to if we, but pick
up our gifts and create of our own a new and
correct destination. 'He leadeth thee', if we
will follow. Your words are very inspirational.
Thank you...
Comment Written 16-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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I am truly honored and delighted that you enjoyed this work and I deeply appreciate your wonderful six star confirmation! Blessings and thanks! Vance
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Food for thought...Thank you!
LOL::}}Joyce
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Food for thought...Thank you!
LOL::}}Joyce
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Thank you so much and your words also are very inspirational and very encouraging to me! Blessings! Vance
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LOL::}}Joyce
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Dearest Joyce, you have created true and GENUINE GRATITUDE, a gift for which there is no equal! Thank you!! Love and hugs! Vance
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Thank you, my friend...Hugs:}} Joyce
Comment from GE Parson
GREAT AND TRMENDOUS SPIRITULE INSIGHT.
THE LITTLE FLOWER THAT MANY.LIKE MYSELF
TAKE A LOOK AND SAY "oh HOW BEAUTIFUL.
AND THEN GO ON MY WAY AND FINISHE THE
TASK I STARTED OUT TO DO.
SORRY THIS IS SO SHORT; I'M NOT FEELING THE BEST
TODAY SHALL GIVE YOU A RAIN CHECK.
mY OVE TO YOU ALL JERRY
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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GREAT AND TRMENDOUS SPIRITULE INSIGHT.
THE LITTLE FLOWER THAT MANY.LIKE MYSELF
TAKE A LOOK AND SAY "oh HOW BEAUTIFUL.
AND THEN GO ON MY WAY AND FINISHE THE
TASK I STARTED OUT TO DO.
SORRY THIS IS SO SHORT; I'M NOT FEELING THE BEST
TODAY SHALL GIVE YOU A RAIN CHECK.
mY OVE TO YOU ALL JERRY
Comment Written 16-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Jerry thanks so much for this wonderful review and I hope you feel better soon! I was hoping to hear from you as your insight is so very important to me! Blessings dear friend! Vance
Comment from petalangela
This is truly an insightful piece that speaks f loving help to others. It is you through and through my gentle loving loving writer of beautiful words
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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This is truly an insightful piece that speaks f loving help to others. It is you through and through my gentle loving loving writer of beautiful words
Comment Written 16-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Dear One: YOU are the inspiration behind this work and all my energies and spirit are entwined in these words as a message and hoped-for blessing and gift to you! With love and Gratitude to YOU! Vance Thank you sincerely for the six gracious stars!
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Gentle loving cyber hugs sent to you from my sick bed
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem about gratitude seems to take on a shape. Is it the shape of a flower? The sea below it? The philosophical message is intense and calls for personal belief. Very cool.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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This poem about gratitude seems to take on a shape. Is it the shape of a flower? The sea below it? The philosophical message is intense and calls for personal belief. Very cool.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much Bill: I truly appreciate (AND AM DEEPLY GRATEFUL FOR) your kind words and thoughts! Vance