Comment from Taffspride

Excellent

A very good entry for the contest. You appear to have met all of the contest rules with rhyme, and syllable count.

A good message in very few words.

Good luck in the contest.

Iechyd da

Ann.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thanks so much.

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

I found this poem to be well written and an overall good read. Nice contest entry for the 1-6-1 contest. Thank you very much for sharing this as I really enjoyed reading it. Best wishes in the contest. Such a cute picture as well!!

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thanks so much.

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Exceptional

This is a good entry for the Rhyme That 1-6-1 prompt contest. The form and syllable count is correct according the rules of the contest, and it has some good advice. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015

Thank you so much for a lovely review.

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

Good advice, indeed. Trying is the hardest part
of getting back on your feet after a set back.
Your three rhyming words
work very well together.

Best of luck.

Peace, Lee

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 Comment Written 15-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015

Thank you so much for your wonderful review.

Comment from Jacob Collins

Excellent

A nicely written piece, mystery writer. I liked the imagery that you used in your writing. You'll never achieve anything if you don't get up and do it. An excellent piece, good luck in the contest...Jacob

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 Comment Written 15-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015

Thank you so much for your encouraging words.