Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello :)

Beautiful poem about spiritual fervor. Well chosen words to evoke exaltation. Attractive presentation with a lovely picture. Good job!
Gypsy

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015

Thank you Gypsy for the lovely review.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Excellent faith poem. You find several places in which God may be found--the gentle rains, a mother's kiss, the ocean's roar. As you suggest from the wide array of places you describe, God's presence is everywhere. judi

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015

Thanks Judi for the review. In the first chapter of Romans tells us that even in nature itself God can be seen, so man is without excuse when he will not see Him for who He is.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Patricia,

This is another great poem. I enjoyed the read very much. Thanks for sharing it. I wish I could get so many different ideas the way that you do for writing poems. You're great at writing them.

Kat

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015

Thanks Kat, for a find review.

reply by MizKat on 06-Nov-2015

Welcome friend. Kat

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem. It has great flow. I like the idea of hearing Jesus in the many examples you give the reader. I like the gentle rain reference the best. I see no changes. Good job and thanks for sharing an uplifting poem.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015

Thanks for the lovely review

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Patricia. I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem confirming the Trinity. Each of the stanzas reminds us of God, Jesus, and Spirit. Truly lovely. Marilyn

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015

Thank you Marilyn for the lovely review.

Comment from Linda Engel

Excellent

In all things praise God and all His blessings. Beautiful poem.

BeePeas just wrote a poem about November being a month for praise and thankfulness.

I just read about four others with the same message.
I think God has sent His voice through my friends to speak to me about gratitude and sharing.

I am so glad that I fanned you .for your words are like a daily devotion.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015

Thanks Linda for the nice review. I believe God is right on time with messages we need to hear. Blessings, Patricia

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Pat

_ This was beautifully penned.
_ Being triggered by the words from a sermon, makes is a very special message, by it's inspiration.
_ You nailed this, and your super artwork is a great addition.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015

Thanks Jax, for the nice review.

Comment from Unspoken94

Excellent

This is a wonderful poem that testifies to your faith. It seems that everything you experience reminds you of God. I think the Trinity is one of the hardest concepts to understand and yet you have brought balance to it in this poem. Nice work. -Bill

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015

Thanks Bill, for the nice review.

Comment from MacMhuirich

Exceptional

This is a beautiful spiritual poem, it's a real blessing to read. It covers the whole gambit from strength to tenderness. The words, the rhyme and the flow could almost be a prayer, if fact, I would use it as a prayer. Absolutely beautiful.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015

Thanks John, for the nice review and the six.

Comment from Joyce Long

Exceptional

This is really well done. Maybe just the different acknowledgements of the Trinity. God, Jesus, and the Holy Spirit.
I didn't see any errors or see any corrections to be made.
It is wonderful that our Lord is with us always and you have given reference to all the different strengths.
Thanks for sharing.
Joyce 11-5-15

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015

Thanks Joyce for the very lovely review.