Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 73 "Defeated"My book of poems and stories
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Comment from amada
This work is quite nice and quite insightful. It sort tells the story of a man within six short lines. Delightful the image of that little boy searching for an adventure. Nice.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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This work is quite nice and quite insightful. It sort tells the story of a man within six short lines. Delightful the image of that little boy searching for an adventure. Nice.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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What wonderful childhood memories we can capture in writing. I did fall from the tree but actually accomplished climbing it again many times. Thanks for the review. I am glad you like my poem.
Comment from alvina224224
A good giggle, author. Short, sharp, as children mostly are, and a typical instant decision. Not going to do that again! One small point - I don't think the use of numerals is approved in writing, except for dates. So maybe that line should be, I was only two and three. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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A good giggle, author. Short, sharp, as children mostly are, and a typical instant decision. Not going to do that again! One small point - I don't think the use of numerals is approved in writing, except for dates. So maybe that line should be, I was only two and three. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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What wonderful childhood memories we can capture in writing. I did fall from the tree but actually accomplished climbing it again many times. Thanks for the review. I am glad you like my poem. I am going to take your suggestion and make the changes. I did wonder about that but it seemed more child like at the time.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is a cute write, mystery writer, I like the memories this created. I used to climb a tree in front of my aunt's house and sit there to read and to write, I don't think i'd attempt it now as I don't need any broken bones, lol. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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this is a cute write, mystery writer, I like the memories this created. I used to climb a tree in front of my aunt's house and sit there to read and to write, I don't think i'd attempt it now as I don't need any broken bones, lol. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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What wonderful childhood memories we can capture in writing. I did fall from the tree but actually accomplished climbing it again many times. Thanks for the review. I am glad you like my poem.
Comment from royowen
Well done with this entry in this contest, you have certainly fulfilled th requirements of the contest. Nicely succinct, articulate and with no nonsense in its delivery, it certainly is a good qualifier in this competition, well done, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Well done with this entry in this contest, you have certainly fulfilled th requirements of the contest. Nicely succinct, articulate and with no nonsense in its delivery, it certainly is a good qualifier in this competition, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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What wonderful childhood memories we can capture in writing. I did fall from the tree but actually accomplished climbing it again many times. Thanks for the review. I am glad you like my poem.
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Most welcome
Comment from Eric1
Hi mystery author, this is a very good entry for this particular competition, your wonderful poem with its humour and great rhyming should do well, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
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Hi mystery author, this is a very good entry for this particular competition, your wonderful poem with its humour and great rhyming should do well, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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What wonderful childhood memories we can capture in writing. I did fall from the tree but actually accomplished climbing it again many times. Thanks for the review. I am glad you like my poem.
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It was a pleasure to read and review my friend.