Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "You Broke My Loving Heart In Two"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from angelface2
Hi Brett. I can see this as a song. One line is not quite right. I could never love no one but you.. double negative there.. You should say I could never love anyone but you. Same syllable count. Good job. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Hi Brett. I can see this as a song. One line is not quite right. I could never love no one but you.. double negative there.. You should say I could never love anyone but you. Same syllable count. Good job. Miss Sally
Comment Written 19-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Well, what a jerk... just can't understand why he can't fling and she can't think it's alright.... The nerve of her to make a scene....Well, I'll be switched. LOL
I like your free style, lyrics certainly do not have to rhyme.
Unless it is 'World without end.... Amen.."
So you are from Nashville,
I have lots of family there,
Wonderful city, well done sir, I loved what you said, write for your own enjoyment... and others, I know I enjoyed this one immensely...
:-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Well, what a jerk... just can't understand why he can't fling and she can't think it's alright.... The nerve of her to make a scene....Well, I'll be switched. LOL
I like your free style, lyrics certainly do not have to rhyme.
Unless it is 'World without end.... Amen.."
So you are from Nashville,
I have lots of family there,
Wonderful city, well done sir, I loved what you said, write for your own enjoyment... and others, I know I enjoyed this one immensely...
:-) Carolyn
Comment Written 19-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. And, yes. Always write for your own enjoyment. Best advice I have ever been given as a writer. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from His Grayness
Nicely done with bouncing pace and good rhyming. I could immediately pick up the musical background by association which means to me that it would be easily "sing-able" by reader, able to tap their foot and snap their fingers PROPERLY anyway! HIS GRAYNESS
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Nicely done with bouncing pace and good rhyming. I could immediately pick up the musical background by association which means to me that it would be easily "sing-able" by reader, able to tap their foot and snap their fingers PROPERLY anyway! HIS GRAYNESS
Comment Written 19-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, love your lyrics here Brett. It sounds like he's one of those two timing guys who just doesn't understand why she's so upset. She should know he loves her the best.
Excellent job with this.
Gloria
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Ha, love your lyrics here Brett. It sounds like he's one of those two timing guys who just doesn't understand why she's so upset. She should know he loves her the best.
Excellent job with this.
Gloria
Comment Written 19-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Comment from foxangie123
Love the picture first as I do love horses. With that said I love this song too and would like to give you my name, Angie, as referal, and ask to to visit Paramount Song. You really got something. What does it hur go hear this with music, huh. It's that good as are you...
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Love the picture first as I do love horses. With that said I love this song too and would like to give you my name, Angie, as referal, and ask to to visit Paramount Song. You really got something. What does it hur go hear this with music, huh. It's that good as are you...
Comment Written 17-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Comment from heyjude
Brett, how very true as your author notes say...
sometimes a person just can't see they are the
one at fault in a relationship.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2016
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Brett, how very true as your author notes say...
sometimes a person just can't see they are the
one at fault in a relationship.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2016
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Comment from Louise Michelle
LOL - he's got to be kidding. He's constantly cheating and expects her to be more understanding.
I can see some dude, singing this lament at a bar. He's too drunk to take responsibility for his problems. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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LOL - he's got to be kidding. He's constantly cheating and expects her to be more understanding.
I can see some dude, singing this lament at a bar. He's too drunk to take responsibility for his problems. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 17-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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Comment from writeapoem
Matt, a good lyric of lost love the lyrics a good expression and worthy of a song to be produced. I believe each of us writers poets etc have our very own style, keep writing your way. All the best and God Bless
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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Matt, a good lyric of lost love the lyrics a good expression and worthy of a song to be produced. I believe each of us writers poets etc have our very own style, keep writing your way. All the best and God Bless
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
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Comment from Crennan87
This was an intirguing poem. It flowed smoothly and more importantly, I read it again and again because I felt there were more brilliant lines I wanted to re-read.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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This was an intirguing poem. It flowed smoothly and more importantly, I read it again and again because I felt there were more brilliant lines I wanted to re-read.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
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Comment from William Ross
Every time I have a fling. well written good rhyme and great rhythm when read. can't have flings when you are suppose to love someone. Thanks for sharing. have a great day.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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Every time I have a fling. well written good rhyme and great rhythm when read. can't have flings when you are suppose to love someone. Thanks for sharing. have a great day.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
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