Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 69 "A Childhood Memory"My book of poems and stories
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Comment from Drew Delaney
This is a lovely memory which springs forth faith which is even more beautiful. Your writing is down to earth and not difficult to grasp which is nice, Sometimes new writers like to sound so profound but in your case, this is not so.
Good writing.
Drew
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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This is a lovely memory which springs forth faith which is even more beautiful. Your writing is down to earth and not difficult to grasp which is nice, Sometimes new writers like to sound so profound but in your case, this is not so.
Good writing.
Drew
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Thank you so much for your review and kind remarks. This is the first story that I have submitted so was very hesitant in exposing such an intimate experience.
Comment from nancyrabbrose
That is an excellent writing prompt and it has inspired me to submit one of my own. I don't know if the contest is closed or not. I'll check.
I like your style. It felt intimate and close, yet simple and poignant. So sweet and pure.
Thank you for sharing your talent. nancyrabbrose
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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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That is an excellent writing prompt and it has inspired me to submit one of my own. I don't know if the contest is closed or not. I'll check.
I like your style. It felt intimate and close, yet simple and poignant. So sweet and pure.
Thank you for sharing your talent. nancyrabbrose
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Thank you so much for your review and kind remarks. This is the first story that I have submitted so was very hesitant in exposing such an intimate experience.