Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day mate. Very nicely done. This is another string to your ever expanding bag of poetry terms. I like the "ex-stream" play on words, such a well thought out line. Great work once again.

Cheers Fez

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016

G'day mate, it's so nice to see you here. You must be getting better internet connection. I know how hard that can be. Are you and your family okay? I heard there is a terrible fire in Australia. I hope all is well with you.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, you are very kind. Cheers :)
<~~Gypsy

reply by Walu Feral on 09-Jan-2016

We are all okay here. I actually didn't know about the fires. They get them down south each summer, we just get a lot of rain in the north where we are. Thanks for your concern.

Comment from a.w.brooks

Excellent

Well I don't know what to say but great job like always. Thanks for the read Gypsy, Nice hidden meaning and I don't think there is anything else I can say. Thanks for the read and Happy Writing

A.W.Brooks (((( ))))

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016

Thank you Anthony. :)

reply by a.w.brooks on 09-Jan-2016

You're Welcome