Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Haha Gypsy!

You might better put some notes up for Deep Throat here on the site! >LOL
This is a very clever "haiku" and I love your presentation...photo and supernova deep throat thoughts here. So out there!

Linda

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016

Hello, Linda :) LOL I glad you found it funny, that was my goal. I didn't think about the warning, I will do that now. Thank you for reminding me. Thank you for the review, sweetie :)
gypsy hugs

reply by AnnaLinda on 14-Jan-2016

not a warning...an education of what deep throat means...some have not a clue.

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016

if they don't know what deep throat is, they don't need to find out LOL with haiku, you can't explain to the reader what it is, the reader has to figure it out. That is the beauty of the haiku. It's not a test. You either get it or you don't. Besides, every one gets a different idea of what it is. You know? :)

Comment from lightink

Excellent

Now, that's some sexy space imagery! How did you even come up with such thing?
It remotely still reminds me of David Bowie but I have no idea why...
Definitely an attention grabbing piece!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016

Hello, Jiyoti :) When I want to write haiku, I just set back and let the thought pop into my mind. Sometimes I have an idea before, but the ones I like best are the ones that just come to me. I knew I wanted a star.....that was the beginning. I have no idea how I got all the rest LOL. Thank you for the review.
gypsy hug

Comment from I am Cat

Excellent

Linda Lovelace does.... The Milky Way?
Debbie Does... The Galaxy? WTF? LOL ;)
Now that's a deep throat, that's for sure! ;)
LOVED it big sis! LOL
I'm damn damn damn out of sixes, but hell, this is a fun one! ;)
well done~
woot
Sister Cat

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016

LOL thank you, Sister Cat ! Somebody just asked me to put a sexual content warning. LOL I wrote it like in 10 minutes, once it comes to me, it just wants to get it publishedd. I was going to a meeting for bipolar so I was a little pressed for time LOL

Thank you, little sister, Love You!
sister gypsy hug

reply by I am Cat on 14-Jan-2016

sexual content? really? OMG LOLOL

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Oh my land woman. Are you trying to put the fright of black holes into me? HAHA.

What an exceptional piece of art. The colours and swirls are amazing.

LMFAO!!! HAHA. Sorry I am totally laughing out loud now. Who'da thought the stars could be such great fodder for some terrific humour.

Love it. Especially the big bang.

Gloria

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2016

Thank you, sweetie, I appreciate your awesome review and kind words. You're the best. I am glad I made you laugh, that is what I was going for. LOL