Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

Nicely written no net with a beautiful message, what wonderful imagery in you wording. Thank you for sharing your work and best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016

Thanks so much for your kind review.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

This is a lovely spiritual poem which shows the Speaker's faith AND his love for the beauties of nature.
I like how you personify the sun as a "she" and the alliteration used in line 4 to enhance the mood of evening.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016

Thanks so much for your kind review.

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Mystery Author, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, a beautiful well written nonet, but the last word should be one syllable and 'Jesus' is two, it will be disqualified if you don't change it, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.

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 Comment Written 24-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016

You are so right. Thanks for the heads up. I got caught on that one and appreciate your review. Have a good day.

reply by Eric1 on 24-Jan-2016

You are so welcome my friend.