Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Barefooted, the only way to ever run around.

Especially if you are a young child out doing what children do. Playing in a creek.

Sure the cold water does "makes my toes numb".

Well written poem that captures this innocence of youth.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2016

Thank you. We still have the creek running through the backyard.

Comment from trumby

Excellent

Well written poem. The picture used and the poem itself is both lovely. It made me imagine little kids playing. I enjoyed this. Good entry to the contest. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2016

Thank you. We still have the creek running through the backyard.

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

I liked this poem very much and found both the poem and the picture really cute. I could picture a little girl wriggling her toes in a river by your words alone. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2016

Thank you. We still have the creek running through the backyard.