Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine entry for the contest
with very nice aa bb rhyme
it reads quite nicely
It's never to early
to kindle the imagination of children
with images of nature - the the glorious moon
and positive verses
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2016

Thanks for your review and kind comments.

Comment from trumby

Excellent

A well written poem. I love watching the moon. It gives me a certain feeling of calmness. Good choice of descriptive words, and a beautiful image too. This an interesting and enjoyable poem to read. Well done. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2016

Your review is very much appreciated. I always liked to see the face on the moon when I was a child.

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi AnnieDawn, This is a really good entry for this particular competition, your words are truly enchanting and any child would listen to them, the rhyming ,rhythm and meter are all perfect and the flow is to die for, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2016

Your review is very much appreciated. I always liked to see the face on the moon when I was a child.

reply by Eric1 on 02-Feb-2016

You are very welcome my friend

Comment from Lulube

Exceptional

Lovely, well penned. I love the concept and the descriptive verses. You personalised him quite well, the kids will love it. Easy to read, great flow and natural rhyming. The last verse tightens up the whole scenario quite well.
Are those the times you cannot sleep? Great line, with a hint to ponder.
Enjoyed this poem
good luck in the contest\

lulube

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2016

Thank you so very much for your kind review and the bonus of the stars. That is an honor which I appreciate.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

Nice children's poem but I think that adults can relate to it as well. Nice structure to your stanzas and the rhyme flows very nicely.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2016

Thanks for your kind review. I always liked the moon as a child and wondered why it had a face.

Comment from Cheryl9359

Excellent

I really like your poem, it is very good. I like how you describe the moon and how it is, it is so true. This is a nice poem for children too. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016

Thank you so much for your review. I always loved the moon as a child.

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

I like the way the poet addresses the moon personally. It is very child-friendly and adults will like it as well. I like the picture of the moon as well. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016

Thank you so much for your review. I always loved the moon as a child.

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

Gosh what an amazing thing you have written here. This will be enjoyed by every Nancy, woman, child, any reader. Excellent Plus Some....

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016

Thank you so much for your review. I always loved the moon as a child.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Some times the moon is visible at Noon. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016

Thank you so much for your review. I always loved the moon as a child.

reply by c_lucas on 31-Jan-2016

You're welcome, Annie. Charlie

Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

Hi Anniedawn
I love this poem, I can remember as a child telling the moon all my troubles and woes, making me feel better.
This is great for children, I think they will relate to the moon quite easily.
Lovely.
Brenda

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016

Thank you so much for your review. I always loved the moon as a child.