Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Voices Rejoice"My book of poems and stories
13 total reviews
Comment from Jonadab Ezerie
Nice faith based poem .Love the art demonstrated in your style of writing .Singing is a form of worship, good to know you did a great job writing about it
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
   |
Nice faith based poem .Love the art demonstrated in your style of writing .Singing is a form of worship, good to know you did a great job writing about it
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
-
I am very thankful for your review and kind comments. I wrote this 25 years ago with no knowledge of poetry so it follows no theme. I am really a novice taking chances. Thank you.
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
A lovely entry into the Faith Poetry Contest. So inspirational and really magnifies your faith strongly. Good rhythm and rhyme throughout. Excellent content. If any change would be made, it would be your final line for the sake of meter:
But when I reach my Heavenly Home then my voice will be heard.
Perhaps, "But when I reach my Heavenly Home, my voice then will be heard." I think it smooths out the meter for that last line, but, it is a wonderful work, regardless. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Came back for a second read and, yes, it is much smoother in its last line now. I really do love this piece...You praise God with a talent that you have not claimed...your writing! God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
|
A lovely entry into the Faith Poetry Contest. So inspirational and really magnifies your faith strongly. Good rhythm and rhyme throughout. Excellent content. If any change would be made, it would be your final line for the sake of meter:
But when I reach my Heavenly Home then my voice will be heard.
Perhaps, "But when I reach my Heavenly Home, my voice then will be heard." I think it smooths out the meter for that last line, but, it is a wonderful work, regardless. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Came back for a second read and, yes, it is much smoother in its last line now. I really do love this piece...You praise God with a talent that you have not claimed...your writing! God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
-
I am very thankful for your review and kind comments. I wrote this 25 years ago with no knowledge of poetry so it follows no theme. I am really a novice taking chances. Thank you and with a comment on that line from another reviewer I did change it.
-
Your very welcome...hope I didn't insult! I know my poetry is my children and I am very protective of them...lol going to re-read now. God bless and hugs, Susanne
-
No I did not take any offense. I appreciated your input. I hope I came across in a positive way.
Comment from patcelaw
A very good thought in this poem./ We indeed will sing in Heaven. We will sing a new song that even the angels cannot sing, which I think will be about the grace and mercy of God. Angels do not know or have they experienced grace and mercy. Patricia
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
|
A very good thought in this poem./ We indeed will sing in Heaven. We will sing a new song that even the angels cannot sing, which I think will be about the grace and mercy of God. Angels do not know or have they experienced grace and mercy. Patricia
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
-
I am very thankful for your review and kind comments. I wrote this 25 years ago with no knowledge of poetry so it follows no theme. I am really a novice taking chances. Thank you.