2016 GYPSY's HAIKU
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "haiku ( sitting across the lake )"a published book of haiku
19 total reviews
Comment from Lisa Deverick
The calling of the hawks in the background are simply awesome! So....does the one you love call you Hawk" ?! haha Pretty cool nickname if so :)
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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The calling of the hawks in the background are simply awesome! So....does the one you love call you Hawk" ?! haha Pretty cool nickname if so :)
Comment Written 13-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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LoL I'll have to ask him. He calls me, darlin' with a southern drawl, pretty sexy, actually. Thank you, Lisa, you are very kind. I always appreciate excellent reviewers like you, Lisa.
*gypsy hugs*
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With all the play on words you have done recently, I thought maybe it was you that was referred to as hawk
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Yeah, I got that. LoL I was playing along with you.
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Now I see how it is... I should have known you 'get' my dorky humor haha
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi GBR,
I love the presentation on this Haiku, made me wonder what it was then I realised it was the sound of your Haiku. Very clever. I wonder what was for dinner.
Great.
Brenda:))x
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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Hi GBR,
I love the presentation on this Haiku, made me wonder what it was then I realised it was the sound of your Haiku. Very clever. I wonder what was for dinner.
Great.
Brenda:))x
Comment Written 13-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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Stuff hawk. LoL
Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
*gypsy hugs*
Comment from lfemine
Wow! I was fully unprepared for the hawk calls! I looked outside my window to see where it was coming from. Haha. Lovely poem. Great picture and sound effects.
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Wow! I was fully unprepared for the hawk calls! I looked outside my window to see where it was coming from. Haha. Lovely poem. Great picture and sound effects.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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Thank you for the review and kind words
*gypsy hugs
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Welcome
Comment from robina1978
An really gorgeous photo that complements your small poem perfectly. It is a very well written Haiku for your love. Chestnuts in Autumn is the main thing.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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An really gorgeous photo that complements your small poem perfectly. It is a very well written Haiku for your love. Chestnuts in Autumn is the main thing.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
*gypsy hugs
Comment from William Ross
Haha, dinners ready, not sure if you if you meant a funny but I find it so in a witty way. good job and thought on this. have a good day.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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Haha, dinners ready, not sure if you if you meant a funny but I find it so in a witty way. good job and thought on this. have a good day.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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LoL hawk for dinner LoL not really.
Thank you for the review and kind words
*gypsy hugs
Comment from Dean Kuch
Once again you have presented us all with another beautifully written haiku, Gypsy Blue Rose.
The 6/7/4 syllable count is well with the haiku "norm" of seventeen syllables, or less.
You've utilized concrete imagery with the lake, and the hawk.
It goes without question that the presentation is just as impressive as the eloquent wording you've used, as your haiku always are.
Even without the audio of the hawk calling his mate home for dinner from across the placid lake, it easily creates a vivid image in the mind's eye.
And isn't that what good haiku is truly all about?
Great job!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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Once again you have presented us all with another beautifully written haiku, Gypsy Blue Rose.
The 6/7/4 syllable count is well with the haiku "norm" of seventeen syllables, or less.
You've utilized concrete imagery with the lake, and the hawk.
It goes without question that the presentation is just as impressive as the eloquent wording you've used, as your haiku always are.
Even without the audio of the hawk calling his mate home for dinner from across the placid lake, it easily creates a vivid image in the mind's eye.
And isn't that what good haiku is truly all about?
Great job!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie. Hawk for dinner. LoL
*gypsy hugs
Did you listen to my recording?
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You're very welcome, and yes, I certainly did listen to your recording.
It was sin-sational!
~Dean ;)
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Thank you, Dean. Do you think it was too much? I think it is but I was experimenting. Please, let me know what you think. Here or PM.
Comment from barkingdog
Mmm, I wonder what he's brought home for dinner ...
The scene is well set with the chestnuts reminding us of fall. Even without the audio, I can imagine the hawk's call from across the lake.
:) ellen
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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Mmm, I wonder what he's brought home for dinner ...
The scene is well set with the chestnuts reminding us of fall. Even without the audio, I can imagine the hawk's call from across the lake.
:) ellen
Comment Written 13-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
*gypsy hugs. Hawk for dinner. LoL
Comment from MizKat
Hi Gypsy,
What a wonderful six-seven-four syllable poem you have written. The picture you found to go with your words is beautiful too with all of its amazing colors. You have done a great job in writing it and finding the perfect picture to go with your words.
Kat
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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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Hi Gypsy,
What a wonderful six-seven-four syllable poem you have written. The picture you found to go with your words is beautiful too with all of its amazing colors. You have done a great job in writing it and finding the perfect picture to go with your words.
Kat
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
*gypsy hugs
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You're very welcome, my friend. Kat
Comment from MacMhuirich
Another beautiful write and presentation. Love the thought of the hawk calling the mate home for dinner. Thank you for sharing.
Bless you
John
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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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Another beautiful write and presentation. Love the thought of the hawk calling the mate home for dinner. Thank you for sharing.
Bless you
John
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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Thank you for the review and kind words
*gypsy hugs
