Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Mate. Very nicely done. You are the champion of these I have to admit.

When we lived in the desert we could see the dust storms coming for days. Sometimes they were huge, but at least we had time to prepare because we could see them coming. In the towns up that way they are not so lucky and everyones clothes get painted red on the clothes hoists lol.

Well done mate.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2016

Thank you, mate :)

Comment from cumulus365

Excellent

Your poem format meets the style in the syllables count. Your poem's meaning is accomplished in that it signifies the summer and all of the related ideas go together. Your poem is simple and beautiful telling about a car speeding down the unpaved path that stirs up a cloud of dust in a very hot weather. I enjoyed reading this poem. Best.

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 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2016

Thank you :)

reply by cumulus365 on 15-Jun-2016

You are welcome. Best.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Gypsy

= Scorching day for sure!
= We are in triple digits here.
= Next week up to 120!!
= Great picture with this, very desert like.

(*>*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
Cheers & Blessings ~ Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax


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 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2016

Thank you, Jax :)