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Astatula (Final Edition)

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A young boy tries to turn his life around.Can he?

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Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
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Brett, this would be tough on anyone, but for Brock it is so unfair. One moment Cody was awake and calling him dad and wanting that wolf. Only to fall back into the coma. Yes, it is so very unfair. Well done Brett!

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 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2016
    Thanks.