Astatula (Final Edition)
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "Ground Meat - Part Two"A young boy tries to turn his life around.Can he?
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Comment from royowen
I'm not sure I enjoy these type of stories terribly much, of brutal people doing sublimely cruel things. It makes Dean Kuch, look like a creator of children's stories. I'm not sure of Cody Schroeder is dead or not. This episode is highly descriptive and well written, the imagery vividly expressive and it feels like I was on the torture scene. Well done, Brett, blessings, Roy
Typo : you(r) wife and eldest kid will soon follow you.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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I'm not sure I enjoy these type of stories terribly much, of brutal people doing sublimely cruel things. It makes Dean Kuch, look like a creator of children's stories. I'm not sure of Cody Schroeder is dead or not. This episode is highly descriptive and well written, the imagery vividly expressive and it feels like I was on the torture scene. Well done, Brett, blessings, Roy
Typo : you(r) wife and eldest kid will soon follow you.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Appreciate the compliment about Dean.
Since he and I are good friends, and I believe for his genre he is the very best writer of Horror on this site, that is the best compliment I have received from anyone on FanStory.
Needed to paint an accurate description of Bee-Bo's character and many readers told me I accomplished that purpose spot on.
Your comments and support appreciated.
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Well done, Brett good job
Comment from Sankey
Yuck! Extremely gross!. Not usually in Cody's story but I guess it had to come. Glad he didn't wait for the doctor's explanation. One spag...Bee-Bo sinisterly snar(l)ed back at him
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Yuck! Extremely gross!. Not usually in Cody's story but I guess it had to come. Glad he didn't wait for the doctor's explanation. One spag...Bee-Bo sinisterly snar(l)ed back at him
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Needed to paint an accurate depiction of Bee-Bo's character. According to many FanStorians I did just that! Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Keep your comments and support coming. They are appreciated.
Comment from marion
Hi Brett
This is a very well written chapter. Fast paced - and gruesome. Captivating the reader from start to finish! "Bee-Bo did not like to be sad. When Bee-Bo was sad somebody paid a very steep price." A great lead to the next chapter - and sinister. Marion.
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Hi Brett
This is a very well written chapter. Fast paced - and gruesome. Captivating the reader from start to finish! "Bee-Bo did not like to be sad. When Bee-Bo was sad somebody paid a very steep price." A great lead to the next chapter - and sinister. Marion.
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Your comments and support appreciated. So stay tuned. Much more to come.
