Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Very well written and exciting as h...
Loved the way you led up to the exciting discovery.
No problems noted and an excellent piece.
Now to wait for the next

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2016

Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story.

Question now is what does a deranged Clown do with his special little prize?

Turn him into sawdust in his favorite wood chipper?

Sell him to the highest bidder?

Or could Bee-Bo have something else on his mind for little Cody?

Stay tuned. So much more to come.

reply by Barb Hensongispsaca on 07-Jul-2016

i think he want to make sheriff suffer with worry first, giving the sheriff time to figure out what to do. Besides, dont forget what a mother bear does to protect her cub

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

Good suspenseful chapter. Also a great portrayal of how a parent wants to let their children grow up yet keep them safe. I will continue to read. Thank you so much.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2016

Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Stay tuned. Much more to come.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

Oh my goodness
this is awful I'm glad the chapter has come to an end.
I'm trying to cook and read at the same time.
I have to stop I smell something burning.
So my friend until next time.
Cookie

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 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2016

Enjoy whatever it is you are cooking misscookie. Sure it will be tasty. Much more to come, as you know.

reply by misscookie on 06-Jul-2016

I'm keeping my fingers cross I have not tried this in a long time by myself since my stroke
I'm making chill with turkey loaf with rice, Marconi tuna salad with sweet pickles green peppers and boil
eggs. That is it.
My aid will do the vegetables and clean up my little mess I tried to do some of it. I'm very proud of myself must tell my daughter to come and sup with me.
Until next time.
Cookie

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

I liked murderize, hehe. I figured it was a special word. More excitement. I know Sheriff Brock will find the guy soon enough. No spags and a good read. Keep it up, mate!


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 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2016

Glad "Hoppy" enjoyed this portion of the story. Liked him a lot! Stay tuned. Much more to come.

reply by Sankey on 06-Jul-2016

Yeah Dean Kuch made him for me I was using the wrong photobucket link before and he was smaller.

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2016

Dean is really one of the good guys. Always so very helpful. And as far as I am concerned the best Horror writer on this site.

reply by Sankey on 06-Jul-2016

Yeah well I am glad I found the bigger Siggy it had me worried the smaller one hehe.