Poems By AnnieDawn
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Comment from Sankey
AMEN Sis a great poem. May I use it on Facebook please? Can't remember if we are friends over there. This was a joy to read. It is sad though some pray the prayer but don't believe in their hearts as per Romans 10:10. 'For with the heart man believeth unto righteousness and with the mouth confession is made unto salvation.' KJV. Dear Sis, too many are gonna miss Heaven by 18" some day. 18" is the distance from the head to the heart. Lord Bless.
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AMEN Sis a great poem. May I use it on Facebook please? Can't remember if we are friends over there. This was a joy to read. It is sad though some pray the prayer but don't believe in their hearts as per Romans 10:10. 'For with the heart man believeth unto righteousness and with the mouth confession is made unto salvation.' KJV. Dear Sis, too many are gonna miss Heaven by 18" some day. 18" is the distance from the head to the heart. Lord Bless.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your kind review. Children's prayers are short and simple and that is what I was attempting to create in this poem. Most of my writings have some part of myself attached to the content. I don't have a problem with your using my poem on facebook and I agree that a lot of people will, unfortunately, miss the entrance into heaven with our Jesus. Please pray for the burden that I have on my heart for what I can do to help show the way for some.
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AMEn Sis, so glad FS let me pick up your reply again it dropped off here but may not have been FS's fault I have a tricky problem with my puter we have not resolved where pages just drop off for unknown reasons. Thanks for permission to use your poem on Face book are we friends over there? I forget? Tell me your Facebook name if you wish to be friends or look for Geoffrey Moore in Penrith NSW Australia that attended Ryde High School in Australia. I think you saw some new stuff I put up I added a chapter to my autobiography and did some big changes to the chapter right next to it they are both still being promoted if interested and you have not been there before.
Comment from Susanjohn
very nicely expressed faith poem! i enjoyed reading this...good luck to you in the contest...this is really quite lovely...perfect picture too
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very nicely expressed faith poem! i enjoyed reading this...good luck to you in the contest...this is really quite lovely...perfect picture too
Comment Written 07-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your kind review. Children's prayers are short and simple and that is what I was attempting to create in this poem.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem of faith. When faith is this sincere, I believe the one who wash themselves from sin will be cleansed and washed from their sins
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A very well-written poem of faith. When faith is this sincere, I believe the one who wash themselves from sin will be cleansed and washed from their sins
Comment Written 07-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your kind review. Children's prayers are short and simple and that is what I was attempting to create in this poem.
Comment from Mary Wakeford
This is a lovely poem of faith and forgiveness of the Father. Beautiful image to accompany your thoughtful words. This stanza--
I stand tall with face uplifted.
And I know that I am gifted
with a love that cancels sin, a Saving Grace.
combined with the very last stanza...my favorites. Well done.
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This is a lovely poem of faith and forgiveness of the Father. Beautiful image to accompany your thoughtful words. This stanza--
I stand tall with face uplifted.
And I know that I am gifted
with a love that cancels sin, a Saving Grace.
combined with the very last stanza...my favorites. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your kind review. Children's prayers are short and simple and that is what I was attempting to create in this poem.
Comment from robyn corum
AnnieDawn,
What a delicious poem about faith and hope and love! I really enjoyed the direction you came from with this one, and I think others will, too! Good luck in the contest~!
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AnnieDawn,
What a delicious poem about faith and hope and love! I really enjoyed the direction you came from with this one, and I think others will, too! Good luck in the contest~!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your kind review. Children's prayers are short and simple and that is what I was attempting to create in this poem.
Comment from Heather Knight
What a lovely poem and what a lovely idea. I like how you use the rain as a symbol of purity, as something that cancels sin.
You've chosen the perfect picture to go with your poem.
Good luck in the contest.
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What a lovely poem and what a lovely idea. I like how you use the rain as a symbol of purity, as something that cancels sin.
You've chosen the perfect picture to go with your poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your kind review. Children's prayers are short and simple and that is what I was attempting to create in this poem.
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Well, you succeeded.
Comment from johnwilson
This is a beautifully simple and well constructed poem on faith. The only suggestion I might make is to leave out the last line as it has already been surmised throughout the poem.
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This is a beautifully simple and well constructed poem on faith. The only suggestion I might make is to leave out the last line as it has already been surmised throughout the poem.
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Comment Written 07-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your kind review. Children's prayers are short and simple and that is what I was attempting to create in this poem. I appreciate your suggestion but I wanted to reinforce the child's thought at the end of the poem. Especially if this poem goes into a child's book. Have a good day.
Comment from tfawcus
An interesting poem in which a child turns into concrete terms the metaphor of washing away sins. Your poem, like the rain, flows well and with a consistent rhythm and rhyme. Nicely written.
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An interesting poem in which a child turns into concrete terms the metaphor of washing away sins. Your poem, like the rain, flows well and with a consistent rhythm and rhyme. Nicely written.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your kind review. Children's prayers are short and simple and that is what I was attempting to create in this poem.
Comment from BlueTiger
Great job! This is a really beautiful piece, and the rhyme scheme works well with it; almost sounds like rain falling. I really enjoyed reading this.
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Great job! This is a really beautiful piece, and the rhyme scheme works well with it; almost sounds like rain falling. I really enjoyed reading this.
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Comment Written 07-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your kind review. Children's prayers are short and simple and that is what I was attempting to create in this poem.