2016 GYPSY's HAIKU
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "2/4/2 Haiku ( Midnight )"a published book of haiku
11 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
Temptation surrounds. Midnight is the time when evil shows itself. Garden suggests that it's going to be plenty of temptation growing. Last line is really effective. Kind of a take-off on a book that was so popular a few years ago, "Midnight in the Garden of Good and Evil." Presentation is really striking and suggests the sinister. I don't think Haiku was a requirement, so you've taken it a step further. Great work, and good luck in the contest. judi
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
  |
Temptation surrounds. Midnight is the time when evil shows itself. Garden suggests that it's going to be plenty of temptation growing. Last line is really effective. Kind of a take-off on a book that was so popular a few years ago, "Midnight in the Garden of Good and Evil." Presentation is really striking and suggests the sinister. I don't think Haiku was a requirement, so you've taken it a step further. Great work, and good luck in the contest. judi
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
-
Yeah, I heard about that book but I never read it. Thank you, my friend, you are very kind :)
-
You're very welcome. judi
