After the French Man
A humorous post break up in Paris14 total reviews
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
This is a clever entry for the 'Twist' contest! All the way through the poem you have your reader believing that you are in Paris, France what with your mention of all things French (stinky cheese, wine, croissants, chocolate) ... then comes the twist ... Say what? ... farmers and line dancing in Paris?? :) .... Oh, ... Paris, Kentucky. :)
Well done! I enjoyed this very different write. It was quirky and fun. I loved it! Best wishes for the contest!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2016
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This is a clever entry for the 'Twist' contest! All the way through the poem you have your reader believing that you are in Paris, France what with your mention of all things French (stinky cheese, wine, croissants, chocolate) ... then comes the twist ... Say what? ... farmers and line dancing in Paris?? :) .... Oh, ... Paris, Kentucky. :)
Well done! I enjoyed this very different write. It was quirky and fun. I loved it! Best wishes for the contest!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
Comment Written 13-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2016
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Thank you. It is nerve racling being new and getting your work judged in a contest!
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LOL ... I remember the feeling well! One is so afraid that their writing will be picked apart. Not to worry ... we don't bite ... at least most of us don't! :)
WELCOME to Fanstory! I thought your write was terrific!
Connie
Comment from RYME4U
Tres Bon! I knew there was a Paris Texas but never heard of the one in Ky. You have told the story well and twisted it nicely . Rhyme and rhythm are good
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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Tres Bon! I knew there was a Paris Texas but never heard of the one in Ky. You have told the story well and twisted it nicely . Rhyme and rhythm are good
Comment Written 13-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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Je vous remercie! I didn't know there was a Paris Texas. I need to travel more. Maybe after the first novel?? :) Thank you for review.
Comment from William Ross
Haha, very good, nice twist Parris Kentucky not France, good rhyme, meter and flow, great job. Best of luck on this and have a great day
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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Haha, very good, nice twist Parris Kentucky not France, good rhyme, meter and flow, great job. Best of luck on this and have a great day
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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I knew the ending all along, it was fun to write the rest. Thank you for your lovely review!
Comment from Alex Rosel
Ha, ha. Deliberately misleading the reader. How dare you? A neatly crafted poem that meets the remit of the contest. I enjoyed reading this. Good luck when the voting booth opens :-)
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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Ha, ha. Deliberately misleading the reader. How dare you? A neatly crafted poem that meets the remit of the contest. I enjoyed reading this. Good luck when the voting booth opens :-)
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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Thank you! It is fun what comes out of the cobwebs of the brain when trying to think of twisty things!!