Senryu (Democracy Rocks)
Veterans Days Thanks17 total reviews
Comment from William Ross
very good in honor of all our fallen for veterans day, nicely done on the senryu. thanks for sharing the thoughts democracy does rock. have a great day
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
very good in honor of all our fallen for veterans day, nicely done on the senryu. thanks for sharing the thoughts democracy does rock. have a great day
Comment Written 12-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Thanks so much for you kind comments.
Jax
Comment from Sanku
A very good poem for the Veterans day.Three small lines but you convey a lot. Every free person living today should thank those gave their all for the sake of the country and freedom
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016
A very good poem for the Veterans day.Three small lines but you convey a lot. Every free person living today should thank those gave their all for the sake of the country and freedom
Comment Written 12-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016
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Amen sister. the vets have gotten a raw deal as long as the USA has existed. Washington's army never got paid.
Thanks for the read and comment
Jax
Comment from royowen
An excellent play on words, I think there have been a number of scams using names on tombstones. A really good senryu, huge cemetery, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
An excellent play on words, I think there have been a number of scams using names on tombstones. A really good senryu, huge cemetery, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 12-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Thanks for the reiew and the blessings.
Jax
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Most welcome
Comment from Brett Matthew West
American veterans should always be remembered.
There is an old saying that rings so true for veterans: "All gave some. Some gave all."
As a proud US veteran pieces like this possess a meaning many who are who are not veterans can not truly understand.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
American veterans should always be remembered.
There is an old saying that rings so true for veterans: "All gave some. Some gave all."
As a proud US veteran pieces like this possess a meaning many who are who are not veterans can not truly understand.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Amen brother. The whining youth don't have a clue. from one vet to another Thanks . Thanks for the review and just plain thanks
jax
Comment from djsaxon
Nice. Joy Graham and myself (independently) have recently completed a series of poems on a daily basis in the run up to Remembrance Day on Nov 11. An emotional journey. DJ
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
Nice. Joy Graham and myself (independently) have recently completed a series of poems on a daily basis in the run up to Remembrance Day on Nov 11. An emotional journey. DJ
Comment Written 12-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Thanks for the review. I just read letter 16. Knocked me out of the park. great write.
Jax
Comment from Sis Cat
400,000 in Arlington?! Thank is a lot of war dead in one place. Your senryu is strong with
"Democracy rocks
Support it with gusto
400,000 in Arlington."
Because of the sacrifices of men and women in the Armed Forces for democracy, we should support it and them.
Thank you for sharing and for remembering on this Veterans Day.
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
400,000 in Arlington?! Thank is a lot of war dead in one place. Your senryu is strong with
"Democracy rocks
Support it with gusto
400,000 in Arlington."
Because of the sacrifices of men and women in the Armed Forces for democracy, we should support it and them.
Thank you for sharing and for remembering on this Veterans Day.
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Thanks for the review and taking the time to comment. To many take there freedom for granted.
Thanks Jax
Comment from winnona
A well -written poem. Your artwork completed the piece well. Your well-chosen words flowed well combining nicely and forming the message of the poem for the reader.
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
A well -written poem. Your artwork completed the piece well. Your well-chosen words flowed well combining nicely and forming the message of the poem for the reader.
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Thanks for your kind comments.
Jax