Fire in the Sky
Lightning seems life-like with its agility.11 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, this is a 5-7-5 placed into Haiku form. I am trying to picture lightening that doesn't connect with dark clouds. I don't think that's possible, but I like how this poem inspires the imagination.
Very Creative.
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016
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Hmm, this is a 5-7-5 placed into Haiku form. I am trying to picture lightening that doesn't connect with dark clouds. I don't think that's possible, but I like how this poem inspires the imagination.
Very Creative.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016
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Thank you for your positive comments.
