What is love
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Comment from krys123
Cheers, Kahpot;
=> You think "way behind" Is is good is better as "far behind"? Just a suggestion.
=> I really like it as it very explanatory and very demonstratively descriptive
throughout each explanation of what love is.
=>Very convincing and although I would set it up differently in the compositional
post, but it is still a fantastic piece of poetry.
=>I would've just capitalize on large letter love is
and then categorize each one below without rewriting" love is" each time? That is,
because after seeing it so many times it does favorably get boring. This is all my opinion and only mine alone.
=> Very good post,, Kahpot, And take care and have a good one especially in a world that loves you dearly.
Alx
;~)
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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Cheers, Kahpot;
=> You think "way behind" Is is good is better as "far behind"? Just a suggestion.
=> I really like it as it very explanatory and very demonstratively descriptive
throughout each explanation of what love is.
=>Very convincing and although I would set it up differently in the compositional
post, but it is still a fantastic piece of poetry.
=>I would've just capitalize on large letter love is
and then categorize each one below without rewriting" love is" each time? That is,
because after seeing it so many times it does favorably get boring. This is all my opinion and only mine alone.
=> Very good post,, Kahpot, And take care and have a good one especially in a world that loves you dearly.
Alx
;~)
Comment Written 05-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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Thank you this is exactly what I was looking for, your suggestions are wonderful, I can see this without the Love is every line, many thanks****kahpot
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You are very welcome, Kahpot.
Alx
Comment from William Ross
Nice write on the writers thoughts and beliefs on what love is and means. good rhyming in like a fact or statement form. besides those who die in war, more people die because of love or over love than hate. Thanks for the share and have a great day
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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Nice write on the writers thoughts and beliefs on what love is and means. good rhyming in like a fact or statement form. besides those who die in war, more people die because of love or over love than hate. Thanks for the share and have a great day
Comment Written 05-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from pome lover
well it certainly seems like everybody likes this very much.
Congratulations on your award and recognition!
You made very good points about love - good, solid love - the real thing.
Thought provoking and meaningful.
good job.
pome lover
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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well it certainly seems like everybody likes this very much.
Congratulations on your award and recognition!
You made very good points about love - good, solid love - the real thing.
Thought provoking and meaningful.
good job.
pome lover
Comment Written 05-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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welcome!
Comment from peculiar2011
I enjoyed your poem. It seemed you all captured many aspects of Love. I really like your last two lines, I think it sums up everything.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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I enjoyed your poem. It seemed you all captured many aspects of Love. I really like your last two lines, I think it sums up everything.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello Kahpot, I love your poem about love, LOL It is cleverly constructed and you have put a lot of thought into the words, which read beautifully and with so much truth. I also think the ending wraps it up very nicely, satisfying. I saw no errors and the publishing is very cool with that great picture. NIce to see you in this poem, cheers, Ana.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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Hello Kahpot, I love your poem about love, LOL It is cleverly constructed and you have put a lot of thought into the words, which read beautifully and with so much truth. I also think the ending wraps it up very nicely, satisfying. I saw no errors and the publishing is very cool with that great picture. NIce to see you in this poem, cheers, Ana.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Angela Hayes
Good read, educational, inspirational, interesting, meaning of love and how to. well presented, easy to read, good guide, well balanced, well stated, post has a lot of meaning, good choice of post.
Good Luck!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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Good read, educational, inspirational, interesting, meaning of love and how to. well presented, easy to read, good guide, well balanced, well stated, post has a lot of meaning, good choice of post.
Good Luck!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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:)
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"What is love?", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Every line of this poem is woven with the golden threads of truth. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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"What is love?", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Every line of this poem is woven with the golden threads of truth. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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*****kahpot, as always, you're very welcome.
Take care, God bless you and best wishes,
the Duchess
Comment from Swampfox1
Just looking at all the repeated "Love is" gives me the willies at even trying to read it. I see some forced rhymes here and there. I can understand that it is self-improvement poetry but the poem has to come from the heart. It reminds me of the 100 word lines I used to write in school. Now, to be quite honest with you, if I were doing this , I would do it this way.
Love has to grow, it must spread around
It becomes part of our lives , then we spread it 'round town
Love is truth, because when in love we need not lie,
It is the way it is, please do not ask me why.
Now that is the way I would do it, unless you have a specific reason for wanting all those "Love is". You have a great poem in the making here and I like the line, "Love is preparing life for our child," that it is. Have a great week.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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Just looking at all the repeated "Love is" gives me the willies at even trying to read it. I see some forced rhymes here and there. I can understand that it is self-improvement poetry but the poem has to come from the heart. It reminds me of the 100 word lines I used to write in school. Now, to be quite honest with you, if I were doing this , I would do it this way.
Love has to grow, it must spread around
It becomes part of our lives , then we spread it 'round town
Love is truth, because when in love we need not lie,
It is the way it is, please do not ask me why.
Now that is the way I would do it, unless you have a specific reason for wanting all those "Love is". You have a great poem in the making here and I like the line, "Love is preparing life for our child," that it is. Have a great week.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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Wow! This is what I need to hear some honesty with some encouragement, I see where your going with the school and Yes reading your review I should have put this on a chalkboard, it was one of my first posts 18 months ago and with support like this I am improving, I am going to heed your words with many thanks****kahpot
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You're welcome
Comment from fm wright
Your poem certainly points out many things that love is and what it entails to feel it. I like the way you found to express love in all its many forms and of the advantages and pitfalls of feeling love.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Your poem certainly points out many things that love is and what it entails to feel it. I like the way you found to express love in all its many forms and of the advantages and pitfalls of feeling love.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nicely written love poem, kahpot. Much truth in many of the lines and the combination of occasional paradox works well such as love is loud without a sound.
I don't have the original to compare and contrast but that's fine too.
Very nice poem my friend.
Gloria
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Very nicely written love poem, kahpot. Much truth in many of the lines and the combination of occasional paradox works well such as love is loud without a sound.
I don't have the original to compare and contrast but that's fine too.
Very nice poem my friend.
Gloria
Comment Written 04-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
