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Spring on Tour

Spring is the rock star of seasons.

19 total reviews 
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes this is well written spring the time when everything comes to fie and new beginnings looking forward to the sunshine I enjoyed good luck regards Jill

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
    Thank you for your positive words.
Comment from marybell1
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I enjoyed reading your poem "Spring on Tour". I could just picture the concert as they all the parade in their colorful costumes.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
    Thank you for your good words and good wishes.
reply by marybell1 on 29-Mar-2017
    You are most welcome.
    Marybell1.
Comment from Asem.inspirations
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You did a great describing spring. Your poem catches the attention of it's readers and excites them about Springtime. It has me looking forward to all of the great things you described that happen in the springtime. I am a big fan of the Springtime as well. New York winters always have me eagerly looking forward to Spring and the Summer. Good poem. You should do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
    Thank you for your detailed review and encouragement.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nicely penned poem.
-I like the comparison between spring and a concert.
-That is quite imaginative.
-Descriptions and imagery are very good and detailed.
-The conclusion ties your poem together very well.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
    Thank you for the detailed review and encouraging remarks.
reply by Pam (respa) on 28-Mar-2017
    You are welcome.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very good poem you have penned about spring for the Spring prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Best wishes! Teri

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
    Thank you for the encouraging words.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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It is stated on tour in exaltation that spring is the rock star of all seasons; because it is known for its beauty and grace, perfume in the air, songbirds sing, woodpeckers play the drums, best concert deserves a Grammy, and poet is its fan; I like, enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
    Thank you for your attention to detail.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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An excellent contest entry. You describe spring as if I could look out my window and see it. Your style is perfect. The meter is spot on.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
    Thank you for your encouraging review.
Comment from dovemarie
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I love spring, and any kind of poem about spring. I liked the way you pictured Spring as being "on tour," I liked your depiction of "songbirds" and "woodpeckers" being the musicians, as Spring's backups. Also I could practically smell Spring's "perfume" in the air. Great poem! Dove

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
    Thank you for your attention to detail and encouragement.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Your moving piece about spring's arrival made me smile. The imagery you created with your words comes through loud and clear. Thank you for sharing this charming piece and good luck in the contest,
~patty~

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 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
    Thank you for your very positive words and wishes.